Devoured

Aelfred and Gwendolyn return for another glimpse into the dangerous life of a Neronan bravo.


Cool mist rolled down off the southern mountains of Isenlund into Selene Valley, covering the trees and road in shadows and secrets. The Valley ran right down the heart of the country to the Gulf of Lum but this far north it was anyone’s guess whether they were in the lands of the Isenkoenig or the territories of Nerona. By Aelfred’s reckoning the only point north of where they were that was in Neronan hands was Casa Verdemonde. But the green mountain was a safe and prosperous land. In contrast the northern Valley was wild and full of danger from man and nature.

It was hardly the first time Aelfred had passed through the Valley with his wife and hopefully it wouldn’t be the last. However he’d never once passed through without incident. So when their caravan wound down out of the mountains and stumbled on a company of men at arms Aelfred regarded them with some trepidation. The troops were led by a flag with a green mountain on a red field. Verdemonde’s colors. Which didn’t necessarily mean Verdemonde’s men.

It wouldn’t be the first time villains had hidden themselves in trustworthy heraldry. After a quick discussion with the caravan leader Aelfred went to speak with the company’s captain. Gwendolyn came along with him, both because a man and wife were less threatening than a man alone and because she would never let him hear the end of it if he didn’t.

To Aelfred’s surprise the captain also had a woman beside him as he approached. Where Gwendolyn was dressed simply, in clothes tailored to hide the armor underneath, this woman was dressed in rich brocade with velvet gloves and long, layered skirts. The only practical thing she wore was her sword belt. That and the long, deadly montante buckled to it hinted that there was more to the woman than fine clothes and good manners.

“Good morning, Captain,” Aelfred said. “What brings you on the road to Lome on this fine day? Are there brigands about we should be aware of?”

The captain lightly spurred his horse and it stepped forward. “None I know of, unless you count yourself among them. We ride to Lome, and from there to Torrence on the business of the Marquis de Verdemonde.”

“How fortunate! Lome is our destination as well.” Aelfred gestured back towards the caravan behind them. “Your servants are a small band of traders from Isenlund and their escorts, seeking to trade our humble wares in Lome. Perhaps we may join with you on our shared journey. Or if you prefer we will clear the road that you may be on your way, for you will doubtless outpace our lumbering wagons.”

He felt the hair of his beard prickling as he waited for the captain to answer. Either option he had just suggested would be fine with him, since a merchant’s wagon train was safer with an armed group than without. If the troops were bandits in disguise it would be easy to tell after marching with them for a few minutes. If they chose to march on ahead then at least it was a sign they had no ill intent, since you didn’t rob wagons by walking away from them. On the other hand, bandits would ask them to stay ahead of them, in their line of sight. What a bandit leader wouldn’t typically do is lean down and whisper with the well dressed woman on foot beside him.

“What do you think?” Gwendolyn whispered, pressing close to him as well.

“There’s a carriage in the back,” he replied, “perhaps they’re taking some emissary or personage to Lome.”

“I was wondering if they were married.”

Aelfred snorted. “Then she’d be on the horse with him, not walking beside him.”

“Do you have your pass from the Southern Keep in Isenlund?” The captain called. The head merchant had given it to him before they came to parlay so Aelfred just had to hold it up, with the seal of der Isenkoenig clearly displayed on the wooden block. “Very well, let us march with you. Our business is not pressing and we will be safer together.”

The well dressed woman was already making her way back through the body of troops as the captain spoke. Aelfred watched her go, only vaguely acknowledging the captain’s words. As he and his wife returned to report their successful negotiation to their employer he wondered who she was. Hopefully it wouldn’t matter. But in a place like the Selene Valley you could never know.


“What was it this time? Woodcutters? A wagon with a broken axle? Or has Captain Enrico finally found an assassin after all this time?”

Noemi sighed as she slung her sword back on top of the carriage and strapped it down. “None of the above, Bi. It was just a group of traders down from Isenlund on their way to Lome.”

“Oh? Do you think they brought any of their griffon feather cloaks with them? It would be nice to have something to help keep warm in the winter and they say griffon feathers are just the thing for it.”

The carriage creaked as Noemi folded herself down inside it, sliding past her charge and onto the bench facing her. “Bi, you’re most likely going to be living in Torrence from now on. They don’t have winter there. It’s not just the fact that you’re out of the mountains, you’re going to be down by the Adriatic Ocean. It doesn’t get cold there.”

Bianca de la Torrence sighed and looked out the window, watching as the soldiers started forming up again. “That’s what they say, Emi. My brother will certainly want to keep me in his court even though neither one of us have ever met or even lived in Torrence before.”

Noemi straightened her skirts and arranged her heavy, booted feet so they didn’t rest on Bianca’s daintier velvet shoes. The lady was better dressed than her guardian but the loose skirt, tightly laced corset and flowing collar and sleeves also made her look ephemeral. Noemi was constantly worried a light jostling would send her floating away in the wind. “Who wouldn’t want you around, Bi? Your sunny personality endears you to everyone you meet!”

Her friend gave her a sideways look, annoyance simmering in the dark blue irises of her eyes. “Don’t you start, too. No one in Verdemonde cared about me until it turned out the last Prince of Torrence died without an heir and all the cousins, step children and bastard lines had to bicker over who would inherit. No one in Torrence will care about me unless they hope to marry their way onto the throne.”

“Bi.” Noemi took Bianca’s hands in her own. “I will always be there for you, no matter what. No one in Verdemonde wants to marry into the Marquis’ branch family that watches the vineyards, after all, much less marry a handmaid born with the Bladebearer’s Gift.”

For the first time in a long time Bianca favored her with a wan smile. “Very well. Stay with me no matter what, then.”


“Something’s wrong, Aelfred,” Erasmus said, falling into step beside the bravo and his wife.

The couple shared an amused look. The tall, wire thin man found three things out of place before breakfast every morning. It was part of what made him such an excellent guard. He’d signed on with the caravan on the trip north from Nerona, long before Aelfred and Gwendolyn did, and the merchants put a lot of weight on his hunches.

“I don’t suppose you know what it is?” Gwendolyn asked. “We can hardly go and tell Signor Gerardo that there is a wrong without an idea to right it, can we?”

“I don’t know yet.” His head hadn’t stopped swinging about on the end of his neck like a fishing bobber the whole time they spoke. His eyes were studying the line of the forest with a brooding expression. “I just wanted you to be aware. You Herakleians are the only other bravos in this troupe worth swearing by and if you’re on your toes as well we might be able to do something before we’re all dead.”

It took an effort of supreme will on Aelfred’s part not to roll his eyes. Gwendolyn babied Erasmus like a frightened child but he found the constant worrying grating. The fact that Aelfred was sharing those nerves with him this time made it worse, not better.

“Good omens!” Erasmus called, his attention now behind them on the newcomers, one hand raised in greeting. The couple beside him followed his gaze to see who he addressed.

Approaching from the Verdemond company was a man who didn’t wear green and red but rather a rich brown robes with muted orange hems and a similarly colored cloth wrapped around his head and tied in the rear. A white tabard with a pattern of red slashes on it protected his front and announced his profession. He was a Herald for the King of Scars.

“Dawn greets us,” the Herald said, replying to Erasmus.

“It does indeed.” Erasmus made some kind of hand gesture to go along with it which told Aelfred it was some kind of ritual exchange. Neronans couldn’t be sensible and just worship the sun so their religion got complicated quickly. Gwendolyn had picked up a lot of it but he only picked up enough to recognize the four Kings of Eternity and their Heralds so he wasn’t sure what the gesture meant.

“Our friend is nervous about our prospects, Omen Reader,” Aelfred called. “I have few pleasant memories of the Selene Valley myself. What say you? Have any portents made themselves known?”

“The King of Scars does not show us the future in the way the King of Dreams might,” the Herald replied, falling in next to Erasmus. Now that he was closer Aelfred could see the Herald was larger than he first appeared. He was only an inch or two shorter than Aelfred himself and just as broad through the shoulders with a strength in the chest and arm mostly hidden by his loose robes. If Aelfred’s scrutiny bothered the Herald it wasn’t enough to make him stop speaking. “We do not receive visions of the future or dreams of our impending death but rather have an understanding of who will die of what wounds and which crops will grow until harvest. Powerful portents, to be sure, but not as useful in predicting the future as some omens.”

“We still appreciate your presence on behalf of He Who Takes the Souls of the Slain,” Erasmus replied. “Let’s hope you do not see his hand stretched out for any of us today.”

A brief shadow passed over the Herald’s expression. It cleared as Gwendolyn said, “Do you Heralds have names or should we simply call you Omen Reader?”

“Ignacio Scarbearer,” he replied with a gracious smile. Like most Neronan men he turned charming whenever addressing a woman. It didn’t distract Aelfred from his name. Scarbearer wasn’t a name taken from his role as a Herald but rather a name derived from his Gift, as most Neronan names were. It explained his robust appearance and presence with the Verdemonde troops. “May I ask yours, Dame…?”

“Gwendolyn of Vernon, although my husband and I are called the Herakleians in Nerona for reasons that are strange to me.”

Ignacio glanced at Aelfred before turning his attention back to his wife. “I can see the resemblance. It’s not an entirely flattering comparison but… I could tell the story when we’re camped, if you really want to know.”

“I suppose it’s not that important,” Gwendolyn mused.

“Good omens!” One of the merchant apprentices hustled past on some errand waving to the Herald in greeting.

He raised his hand to wave in response, his mouth open to reply, when his eyes widened slightly and he stumbled before catching himself. He let his hand fall to his side, his words unspoken. Erasmus, who hadn’t once stopped scanning the horizon as they spoke to the Herald, finally turned his gaze to Ignacio and said, “Something is wrong.”

“Yes.” Ignacio met his gaze. “That man will be killed today unless something changes. So will half of our company. I came to take your measure, see if you were villains in disguise, but you don’t have the look of it. Death hangs over just as many of you.”

Aelfred drew himself up, his own gaze going to the tree line now. “Erasmus, go and tell the lead wagon to stop. If there’s danger afoot we’d better dig in and make ready for it rather than get caught running with our guard down. Propose to your captain he do the same, Omen Reader.”

“I will suggest it but I doubt he’ll agree.” His words weren’t encouraging but the Herald still turned and hurried back towards his company.


There was a banging on the carriage door and Noemi pulled the curtains aside to find Captain Enrico cantering alongside them. “Forgive me, Your Highness.” He gestured to a tall, broad man in the heraldry of Scars. “Omen Ignacio tells me he sees death pursuing us as well as the caravan we met. He proposes we circle up and prepare for an attack and I can see the wisdom in this. However I think it could be better for us to try and outpace the danger, instead. Wagons are poor fortifications and their owners will be underfoot.”

“And I am most likely the reason we will be attacked in the first place.” Bianca added, the implications of the situation not lost on her. She sucked in a deep breath then let it out slowly, a stricken look on her face.

Noemi could tell her friend was at a loss so she spoke up. “Do you know what the nature of the threat is, Omen Reader?”

“My liege’s portents do not work that way,” Ignacio replied. “I only know many here will perish in fire or of being pierced through today. Respectfully, Your Highness, there is no way to know they will perish on your account, either, but there may be something we can do to prevent it happening at all. I don’t believe running is the thing to help us or the caravan.”

“We don’t have an obligation to them,” the captain hastened to add. “On the other hand I have an obligation to see you safely to Torrence and your brother wouldn’t wish for you to die before you have the chance to meet.”

“He wouldn’t want to look weak before he takes the throne, you mean,” Bianca snapped, acid on her tongue. Her voice deepened a step and her Gift pushed at the men. “Find a source of water and circle the wagons there; you decided to travel with this group, Captain Enrico, we’re not going to abandoned them now.”

The two men bowed slightly to Bianca and split away from the carriage to carry out her Command. Noemi doubted it would have much effect on either one. Although powerful in the moment her friend’s Gift of Command rarely lasted more than a breath or two and Enrico, in particular, would be resistant to it as he had the same Gift. But he was a loyal man, as well, and would carry out the order regardless. Bianca’s mood, on the other hand, had quickly shifted from haughty and demanding to glum once again. “I shouldn’t have done that.”’

“Why not?”

“With the exception of you, Emi, no one in your family thinks of me when they say to keep me safe. They worry about offending the Prince of Torrence, whoever that is at the time.” Bianca sighed and sank back into the carriage cushions. “That only goes so far, though. I’m sure if I get an entire company of men killed over some foreign merchants even your father will run out of patience.”

“He may,” Noemi said gently, “but I won’t. The Marquis always sent me away, to learn medicine, to learn the sword, to watch the foster girl. What have you always said?”

A wan smile touched her lips. “Stay with me, Noemi.”


Looking back on it, the Verdemonde troops being bandits in disguise would have been so much simpler than the actual danger lurking in the Valley. Or rather, just above it.

Erasmus brought word that the Verdemonde were planning to find a river or lake to camp beside about ten minutes after the Herald left to talk to his captain. One of their scouts had the Gift of Leaping and started hopping up over the treeline to see what was out there. He’d made three jumps when a blast of fire came out of the sky and struck him. The scout tumbled out of the sky, screaming, but never made it all the way to the ground as the dragon swooped past overhead and snatched him up. Just like that, everything went out the window.

“Abandon the wagons!” Aelfred bellowed, reaching up and dragging one of the merchants off his seat then shoving him towards the treeline. “Get under cover, quickly!”

There were generally two reasons dragons strayed into human lands – hunger and greed. The mountains were full of goats, rocs and other animals that could easily sate the hunger of even the largest dragons which meant the dragon most likely sought gold and gems. Perhaps it caught the scent of coins from the wagons. It was the only thing that made sense, unless it had somehow concluded it could ransom a bunch of soldiers back to Marquis Verdemonde.

In spite of his order the chief merchant whipped up his wagon and started down the road. “Where are you going?” Aelfred demanded, waving frantically to him. “Get down from there!”

“All the coins and talismans are here!” He yelled back. “It will chase me first! Keep my son with you!”

Cursing under his breath Aelfred cast his eyes about until he saw the younger man, scrambling to unhitch a horse from a wagon to chase after his father. He pointed and snapped, “Gwendolyn, bring him!”

“Randolf!” She snapped, because of course she knew his name. “Come here!”

The Command latched into the boy and he took three steps away from the wagon before he could make himself stop. It was enough that Reinaldo Grip, one of the other guards, got hold of the boy and dragged him towards cover. Immediate concerns dealt with, Aelfred took stock.

The Verdemonde were breaking apart their formation so it couldn’t be wiped out with a single exhalation and they were abandoning the carriage so they could take cover under the trees. That was when Aelfred felt his heart drop. A young girl, perhaps sixteen years old, was climbing down with the help of the well dressed swordswoman from earlier. He didn’t recognize her but he knew the type. With her light and airy appearance and the utter deference from the swordswoman, captain and Herald all showed her in spite of the circumstances it was obvious this girl was important. Someone, somewhere would pay a fortune to have her back. That had to be what the dragon wanted.

A burst of light, a whoosh of flame and a short, abrupt scream came from the opposite direction, where the caravan leader had gone, and Aelfred’s attention was dragged back that way. He backpedaled towards the treeline himself, trying to work out the best defense now. Abandoning the wagons to the dragon made sense when they were the only thing that the creature might want. But if it wanted to take the girl then it wasn’t going to help them that much.

Flashes and screams flickered out of the woods. The dragon was hunting down anyone who ran, herding them back into a single location to ensure its prey would not escape.

Erasmus appeared by his elbow. “What now? It’s in the trees and if we fall back we’ll just make a larger target grouped together with the soldiers.”

“Fall back,” Gwendolyn said. “It’s not impossible to kill a dragon with a company of men and it doesn’t look like we’re going to escape it.”

“Agreed,” Aelfred said. His stomach rumbled, even though breakfast was only a few hours behind them. “On the double, it’s getting close again.”


“Clayhearts forward!” Captain Enrico ordered, spurring his horse along the rapidly forming skirmish line. Six men marched forward, shields in hand, as their bodies transformed into living earth. Noemi found herself musing that if anyone was going to survive this battle it was them. The ground did no burn, after all. “We can buy you time to escape, Highness. Lady Verdemonde knows this road and can see you safely back to the mountain. The Marquis can send you home at a later time.”

“No, captain,” Bianca replied, drawing herself up to her full five feet of height. “Dragons are meticulous. It will hunt you down and devour you all to cut us off from help and sow fear. Ultimately any noblewoman of Nerona knows they cannot escape when a dragon sets its sight on them. I must either surrender to it or make a stand. You are men of Verdemonde, not Torrence. I can’t ask you to die for me but I don’t wish to be set on a pile of treasure in some dragon’s cave and wait to see if a distant brother I have never met will ransom me. If you wish to run, please leave me your dagger.”

“Not necessary, Your Highness,” Enrico replied. “If you wish to make a stand then Verdemonde is proud to stand with you.” He glanced at Noemi. “Is it not so?”

“I cannot speak for my father or the Prince of Torrence,” she replied. “But I will always stand with you Bi, dragon or no.”

Enrico nodded and looked back to his men. “Conjurers! Begin fortifying.” Two men in lighter armor began summoning foot high stones from thin air, allowing them to fall in place and make a low wall. Noemi wasn’t sure it would do much against a dragon but it kept the men busy. The captain’s stomach growled fiercely and he scowled. “Can’t imagine what’s wrong with me.”

“It’s the dragon,” Noemi replied. “They are hunger incarnate and their power far overshadows any human Gift. As it draws near it’s nature will corrupt our own.”

“Wonderful.” He looked back to his men. “Impulse line, spread out!”


Aelfred took the time to free the horses and ensure the merchants were out of the wagons, running back and forth to check each of the five remaining wagons while Gwendolyn encouraged the stragglers on to shelter in the woods or behind Verdemonde’s lines. Erasmus and Reinaldo remained at the edge of the caravan on the lookout. They had just finished with the wagons when Aelfred saw Erasmus’ eyes widen and Gwendolyn screamed, “Run, Aelfred!”

He knew better than to look so he just took off in a dead sprint. Even with the power of his wife’s Command spurring him onward he still felt the heat of the flames that burst over the wagons licking at his heels. An invisible force grabbed him as Reinaldo’s Gift pulled him forward, off his feet and out of the blast zone. Erasmus caught him and kept him on his feet then the four of them took off at full tilt towards the Verdemonde company, the flames casting long shadows before them. A shield wall of living earth marched out to meet them, brandishing spears. A second wave of fire chased them but the transformed Clayhearts intercepted the attack without flinching, the flames washing harmlessly over their steel shields. Aelfred skidded to a stop behind them and spun, raising his ax up for a throw, hoping to at least briefly delay the monster that pursued them.

The heat of the dragon’s breath had burned off the mist but now a thick smoke took its place. It hung over the remains of their caravan like a thundercloud, a huge form looming over it. A crown of horns rested on a head shaped like a spade with a hooked beak and glaring reptilian eyes. It’s scales were the color of coal and it’s teeth shone like silver. It braced its serpentine body upright on two long legs that were as thick or thicker than its chest and its throat shone with a dull, red light. Gossamer insect wings as wide as the sky sprouted from its back lazily beating the smokey air.

Aelfred had seen many horrifying creatures in his life and even he felt his heart quail at the sight. Practice and discipline drove his arm forward and his hand to release his ax but his mind was distracted. His Gift lost it’s hold on the weapon. He could not use it to tap the weapon onto the best course or add its extra Impulse of power. So his trusty ax drifted off course and bounced of the scales of the dragon’s arm, causing no visible damage but provoking it to an enraged roar. Aelfred saw the men in front of him cringe and his own heart wavered.

Then the dragon charged.

The skirmishing line was brushed aside like paper by the heaving bulk of the wyrm’s body that coiled and writhed like a whip. From the glimpse Aelfred got of it, the creature had only two legs. The rest of its body was free to churn and strike all about and it used its serpentine coils to throw the men of earth about, their weapons flying from their hands. Aelfred scrambled, grabbing a dropped spear in each hand then immediately throwing one at the dragon.

This time he kept his Gift trained on it and guided it towards the dragon’s head. The wily serpent opened its mouth and belched a stream of fire that turned the weapon to ash. The wave of heat hit him like a slap. Then Erasmus shoved him out of the way just before the torrent of flame washed over them both. The other bravo’s body disappeared.

A titanic clap of thunder shook the ground. The dragon’s fire turned from bright red to shocking blue as a bolt of lightning ran up the fire and into the dragon’s head. It jerked upwards, shrieking in pain. The crackling electricity pulled back together into Erasmus, who perched precariously atop the dragon’s head for a moment. He scrambled to try and gain purchase on the creature’s horns. Then the dragon bent like a bow and launched itself into the sky again, sending Erasmus tumbling to the ground. Reinaldo caught him before the landing smashed all the bones in his body.

Aelfred let himself flop flat on the ground once he saw his friend was safe, at least for the moment. The shock of the dragon’s presence and the impact of the thunderclap had left him rattled and he needed a moment to rally. Perhaps more than a moment. By the time he rolled over to his front and pushed himself up things were quite different. The Verdemonde men were scattered and only a handful were still visible among the smoke and flames, huddled around the wreckage of the carriage. Hands grabbed Aelfred’s shoulders and hauled him to his feet. “Up with you, Aelfred,” Gwendolyn hissed from her place on his right. “It’s time to make the throw of your life. You saw that old snake’s evil little eyes, didn’t you?”

“What of it?” He gasped, swaying on his feet.

“You have a spear in hand, don’t you?” She was right, he was still holding that spear in his hand. “It’s time to throw it.”

“And don’t pull back your arm,” Erasmus added.

That was when he understood what they were planning. As he shifted the spear into his right hand and pulled it back to throw Gwendolyn backed away, saying, “Your arm is strong and your aim is true, Aelfred, and your body forged to stand against the storm!”


“Loose arrows!” Enrico had dismounted his horse and let it flee, now he worked a crossbow himself as he called commands. Alas, the arrows went wild as the wind from the dragon’s wings battered them. The situation had turned grim very quickly once the captain’s line of skirmishers were knocked aside. The conjured wall did little to stop the dragon’s breath and now a dozen men lay scattered across the road, covered in burns.

The monster swept past them, uncaring, belching fire at a trio of soldiers who fled back into the treeline. They threw bolts of fire and thunder from their hands in retaliation. The fire did little to deter the dragon but the lightning pained it and it crashed to the ground again, spewing flame and smashing trees in its fury as it sought to pry its antagonists out of the forest and devour them. “Steady!” Enrico bellowed. “Reload!”

But half the company was dead or injured at this point and Noemi could see that the survivors were beginning to loose their nerve. The creature’s very presence was horrifying and they had few soldiers with powerful Gifts left. She hefted her montante onto one shoulder and said, “Bi, this isn’t going to work. It’s time you left.”

Her ward gave her a shocked look. “I cannot, Emi. I asked them to make a stand!”

“She’s right, Highness,” Enrico replied. “We’ll hold here as long as we can but it was madness to think a mere fifty men could stand against a dragon of that size. Verdemonde swore you would reach Torrence safely. Don’t let me be a liar as well as a dead man.”

For a moment Bianca looked stricken. Then she slipped a hand through Noemi’s elbow and said, “I won’t allow either, Captain Enrico.” Her voice carried over the battlefield with supernatural clarity. “By trick of birth I am called Torrence but the place where I found my home was not that city in the west or the orchards of the Gulf. The place that called me its own was Verdemonde in the north. The green pines of the mountain sheltered me, the fruit of its vineyards sweetened my life and the red soil of its valleys is still on my shoes! Verdemonde reached out and took my hand once. I’ll not leave its people to die for me now. Show courage, men of Verdemonde! We will win this yet!”

Noemi swallowed once, watching the men rally at her words. This was the true magic of Bianca’s gift. Orders were not her forte, rather the power to stir the hearts of others to rally around her. Her father insisted the push of Bianca’s Gift was like no other Command he’d ever heard. For her part, Noemi couldn’t say if that was true. She’d never once felt any kind of unusual push from her ward. Perhaps that was because of the trust between them, perhaps she’d just been so warped by Bianca’s words over the years she couldn’t imagine life without the force of them in her mind.

Perhaps the fact that the only thing Bianca asked of her was something she was perfectly happy to do had something to do with it. Noemi wasn’t sure. Would she still have taken the hand of that five year old girl by the river if she’d known that eleven years later it would drive her to face death in the Selene Valley under the shadow of a dragon’s wings? She wasn’t sure about that either. It wasn’t exactly the time to work it out.

In the distance the dragon lifted into the air again, blood dripping from its jaws. Enrico watched it and sighed. “If that is how it’s to be, what am I to say? You honor us, Highness.”

“She does more than that,” Ignacio rasped, his voice taught with pain. Noemi spun to see him limping back from the destroyed wall draped over the arms of two soldiers. Four others limped along behind him. A moment ago they had been covered in burns and soot, now their skin looked perfectly healthy in spite of the ash that caked it. In exchange the Herald’s face was a mass of charred flesh, cracked and oozing blood and puss. Foul smelling liquids soak through his robes from wounds beneath. Only his eyes were intact, bright points of wild energy. “She’s showing you the way to victory!”

Bianca sucked in a breath. “Ignacio? How are you alive?!”

“No scar I bear can slay me, de la Torrence!” He spat the words around his pain with a ferocity that frightened even the hardened soldiers that carried him. “Bring that dragon close enough for me to touch and we’ll see if the same is true for him!”

“He’s not wrong but he is clearly mad.” The captain pointed towards the back and the carriage. “Get him to the rear, if we live we can take him to a Mender in Lome to speed his healing process. Archers, ready! The rest of you, make your stand by the princess as you see fit!”

The dragon swooped towards them again.

“Stand strong!” Bianca called. For better or worse this was what they had to do so Noemi took a half step forward in front of her friend and raised her blade over her head, feeling her Gift charge it with the familiar glow of power as she waited for the impact to come.

The arrows from the soldiers had no more effect on the dragon the second time around. It was focused on Bianca, its eyes bright with malice, as its two long, clawed legs reached down towards her greedily. It didn’t breath fire this time. Somehow Noemi could see that it didn’t want to kill its prize. The rest of them were inconsequential in its eyes.

Then a spear crashed into one eye, replacing it with a spray of green blood. The dragon roared and flailed through the air, bucking drunkenly as it writhed in pain. For a brief moment Noemi saw some bravo from the caravan guards, one hand outstretched in a picture perfect throw with another one of the guards bracing a hand on the thrower’s shoulder. Then the second guard turned to a flash of light. The lightning bolt arced through the thrower, setting his hair and beard on end, out of his fingertips, through the air and into the spear.

The dragon’s skull flashed brighter than the noon sun, jerking wildly as it rushed towards them. Noemi stepped forward to meet it and spun her sword around in an overhead flourish, the blade biting into the dragon’s flailing arm, deflecting it fully away from them in a spray of green blood. A strange scent, like cut wheat, filled the air and she was suddenly ravenously hungry.

The dragon spiraled away overhead, screeching in pain, its body pinwheeling through the air as its wings beat the sky furiously. The passage of its enormous body blasted the ground with wind and the humans beneath were blown to the ground in disarray. The dragon snatched up the carriage as it righted itself and threw it in fury. It bounced along the ground, smashing into pieces, and the largest of them careened towards Ignacio and the men who had carried him. Noemi scrambled to her feet but she could already tell that she wasn’t going to make it to them in time.

Bianca did. She threw herself over the Herald just before the wreckage slammed down on top of them. Noemi screamed in wordless panic and ran, her pulse pounding in her ears, reaching the wreckage of the carriage in the blink of an eye. One of the soldiers must have been between Bianca, the Herald and the carriage. His lifeless body lay under the wreckage on top of her and Ignacio. Immediately Noemi grabbed the splintered wood and tried to life it off them but it was too heavy.

The Hearld’s eyes focused on hers and he wheezed out, “Let me touch it. Let me touch the dragon.”

“It’s still too far away.” Noemi wedged her sword under the wreckage and tried to lever it off of them. “Can you take her wounds on you?”

Ignacio flopped one arm over, touched Bi’s forehead and his eyes turned cloudy. There was a sound like snapping bone then Bianca’s eyes snapped open and she whimpered. The Herald’s eyes focused again. “Your leg is healed. Now push, or we’ll die under here.”

Noemi put her shoulder into the pommel of her sword and leaned into it while Bianca got her elbows dug into the ground and pushed. The wreckage surged up for a moment. Then something shifted, the heavy wood slid to a few inches to the side and Noemi’s sword broke under the strain. With no resistance she staggered forward, bounced off the side of the wreckage and slammed onto the ground. With a shake of her head she found herself staring up at the dragon as it shook its head in pain, spraying blood from its wounded eye everywhere. To her shock she found herself drooling.

Smacking herself once, shoving aside the bottomless pit opening in her stomach, she reached for what was left of her sword. Instead she found a hand that grasped her own. She turned to look into Bianca’s eyes. She was smiling as she said, “It’s okay, Emi. Thank you for staying.” Then her eyes turned sad. “Noemi Verdemonde. It is time for you to leave me. Go and be safe.”

For the first time she felt the power of Bianca’s gift as it closed in over her, forcing her to her feet and walking her away from her ward. From her friend. One step, then two steps away from the girl she’d found crying by a river and decided to protect no matter what the cost. Noemi felt the touch of Command now and knew it had never been a part of their friendship. Nor would she allow it to be the end of their friendship.

Noemi felt her own Gift surge within her, the blade she bore in her heart shredding the strings that dragged her away from Bianca and surging forth with dreadful purpose. She spun back to face the dragon and raised her hands to strike once more. A blade of light surged from them and carved downwards, striking the wings from one side of the wyrm’s body, cleaving down through the wreckage of the carriage and into the dirt beneath.

The serpent crashed to the ground, sliding towards them with terrible momentum. As it landed Noemi saw that a wiry man was still clinging to the spear sticking from the dragon’s eye but the impact sent him flying airborne again, flailing. The pieces of the carriage, carved into smaller bits now, bounced and clattered as the ground shook under the dragon’s impact and Bianca quickly scrambled out from under them, dragging Ignacio with her. With a pang Noemi realized she’d cut his left arm off by accident. She grabbed him by the waist and pulled him away as the dragon slid through the wreckage, still howling in pain.

The Herald wrenched himself free from them as they tried to flee, instead staggering forward to slap his body against that of the dragon as it slid by. The result was gruesome. The dragon’s scales cracked and burst, claw marks opened along its flanks and the entire left leg of the beast came away from its body. A moment later Ignacio pushed away from the creature, once again unmarked by the wounds he had carried. Yet it didn’t seem to matter to the dragon.

The creature’s remaining limb slammed into the ground and began to push it upright once more. Noemi tried to call up the blade in her soul again but found that she could not. Then the caravan guard came dropping out of the sky, one hand reaching as his body flashed into lightning once more. The bolt leapt forward and struck the spear again, slamming the dragon’s head back down to the ground. The guard returned to a solid form landing in a heap on the ground beside the lizard.

The wyrm heaved air through its nostrils as if gathering itself for another roar. But the glow had left its throat. It’s body remained at rest. The dragon’s last breath rattled out between its jaws and it came to its final rest. For a long moment the four of them that had survived the final onslaught just sat there and stared at it. Then Noemi raised up a hand and wiped the drool from her chin.


“Gather up anyone left, Reinaldo,” Aelfred rasped, watching the dragon nervously, as if it was about to surge to life again. “Get them on the wagons and get out of here.”

“What about Erasmus?” The other bravo asked. “And we should check to see if any of the Verdemonde men survived?”

“I’ll do it,” Aelfred snapped. “You just get the rest of them out of here. Understand?”

Reinaldo nodded and left. Gwendolyn started to follow him then turned back and grabbed Aelfred’s arm, looking him square in the eye. “Do not taste the body, Aelfred. Do you understand me? Not even a taste.”

He nodded and headed towards the dragon’s corpse. The bodies of Verdemonde’s men were scattered everywhere but Aelfred didn’t have to stop and look to tell they were all dead. As he got closer a scent like freshly baked bread wafted towards him on the breeze. He rubbed at his mouth with the back of his arm. For some reason the wyrm’s body was starting to look like a huge loaf of bread. He was so, so hungry. After a long, hard battle it couldn’t hurt to stop for just a bite to eat.

But he couldn’t. He was just there to check for survivors. The horns of the dragon towered over him as he made his way around the serpent’s head. Strange sounds reached his ears. A sound like crunching stone, moisture squelching and smacking flesh.

On the other side of the head he found four people tearing into the dragon’s body, gnawing on the scales, flesh and horns of the corpse and gulping it down. The sight brought him to a sudden stop. One of them, a girl in a dress caked with blood that plastered the cloth to her body, turned and regarded him with reptilian eyes for just a moment. Then she turned back to tearing into the dragon’s throat, shoving handfuls of flesh into her mouth with reckless speed. For a moment Aelfred watched them eat, his own stomach rumbling in his ears.

Then he turned around without even a taste and trudged back to the wagons. Reinaldo met him. “Did anyone survive?”

For a moment Aelfred stared at him blankly. Then the question made it through the cloud of hunger to his brain and he answered, “No.”

Ten minutes later the caravan’s survivors were gone. An hour later so was the dragon’s corpse. Four bloated, wild eyed figures staggered out of the valley, their enemy devoured.


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The Dark Lord of the Saffron Canal

This story originally appeared in Anvil Magazine #2, and is the first appearance of Aelfred and Gwendolyn Herakleian, two of the many Bravos of Nerona.


“Down you go,” Aelfred grunted, wrapping his hands around his wife’s waist as he hoisted her over the fence and into the canal. The hard plates of metal hidden under her clothes clanked softly as he adjusted his grip. Gwendolyn rested a hand on his forearm as she swung her feet daintily over the wooden railing and let him carry her down the slope to the bottom of the trench. Her worn leather boots skipped lightly over the muck at the bottom of Saffron Canal as he set her down. Her graceful movements were a stark contrast to the dreary surroundings of the wide channel running through Citadel Fionni. She smoothed the front of her skirt and looked up at him with a critical eye.

“Keep a sharp eye out now, Aelfred,” she said, checking the fit of his helmet and gorget then fluffing out the loose, bushy hair of his beard so it stood out prominently. “You’re fierce and strong so this will be another simple job.”

“Of course it will,” he said, brushing a loose thread of hair back under her brigitta cap. Her swirling dress and loose sleeves flattered her figure but it was the hair that always caught his attention the most, gleaming like spun fire in the late morning sun. “All our work on this wretched peninsula has been simple, straightforward and well paying.”

Gwendolyn’s pale, peach colored lips curved down in a disapproving frown. “Now husband, weren’t you the one who thought coming south would serve us better than remaining in Hessex? And we’ve done well enough in Nerona.”

“Nerona might try doing well enough by us once in a while,” Aelfred grumbled, reaching up and dragging his ax off the lip of the canal then slinging it over his shoulder. He looked out over the canal, taking in the brown water and browner dirt, his vision clear and sharp just as Commanded. In spite of his sour mood he felt his limbs surge with power and a fire stoke itself in his belly as he stomped forward along the muddy banks of the waterway. “Look at this place. Can you believe there was ever saffron growing here?”

His wife tutted at his obvious sour mood. “Fionni is the epitome of the Neronan city, my dear, optimized to cram people together as closely as possible rather than giving each of them their own patch of greenery. It’s what makes them so good at working with each other. And let’s be honest, without such places where would the wealthy merchants who pay us come from?”

Aelfred harrumphed and continued along the canal, although his footsteps grew lighter as his mood grew less dark. At least this wasn’t a sewer channel. The Saffron Canal and many other passages like it crossed the Easter Peninsula between the Gulf of Lum and the Adriatic Ocean, allowing larger ships that couldn’t safely cross the rubble strewed entrance of the Gulf a way back and forth between Nerona’s gulfside and oceanic ports. Those canals, along with the Eastpoint Beacon in the city’s Citadel proper, were a great part of why Fionni was such a wealthy and important city to begin with.

Of course when strange happenings made the locals too scared to use one of those canals something had to be done about it. Those somethings happened to be Aelfred and Gwendolyn.

“What do you think it is?” Aelfred asked, running a hand along the stone wall that held up the embankment along the canal. “Rogue Invoker? A Dwimor of the Fair Folk? Or perhaps someone truly has summoned a demon from the dark beyond?”

“Well the last is impossible,” Gwendolyn murmured, carefully keeping pace with him, positioned two steps behind him and one to his right. “All the reports say no one has died. Those from beyond are many things but peaceful creatures who fear bloodshed? Not hardly. I think the Fair Folk are by far the most likely. An Invoker is possible but a distant second. After all, what spirit of nature could they find down here to Invoke? Perhaps they could reach something out in the sea that would answer their call but otherwise these places are built to crush the soul of man and nature alike.”

He was tempted to remind her they were doing well enough in Nerona and maybe she should be kinder to the place. However he knew that she was not talking about the city broadly but rather the canal specifically, with its featureless stone embankment and dreary gray water combining to make a place even a sleepwalker would grow tired of quickly. Besides, he always lost those kinds of word games when he played them with his wife. “A fitting place for a creature calling itself a dark lord.”

“That is the one thing that confuses me,” Gwendolyn said. “The Fair Folk call their heretics and villains Cheats, they don’t associate evil with light or dark, black or white. For them there’s only fair and unfair. So why would one of them describe themselves as a dark lord?”

“That is out of the ordinary for them, true,” Aelfred said, “but remember these are stories from Neronans, not Sextons. The Fair Folk are quite rare in these parts, not like at home. They may have misremembered, misheard or exaggerated what was said since they haven’t heard stories from childhood about the importance of the Folk’s exact words.”

“So true, husband.” In the distance the first bridge after the sea lock grew near. Aelfred shifted his shoulders to keep them perfectly ready and lowered his ax off his shoulder into the ready position. All the stories agreed that the creature terrorizing the canal appeared in shadows. As the sun grew high in the sky the bridges and occasional drainage ditch were the only places where shadows existed in the canal. His wife leaned forward and whispered in his ear, “Sharp eyes, Aelfred. Sharp eyes and ready hands.”

Aelfred swept his gaze back and forth across the canal repeatedly, searching for anything out of place in the tall wooden structure. The canal bridge was a marvel of Neronan construction. A dozen wooden support legs reached down into the canal, all linked to the bridge proper by a series of hinges and pulleys that allowed the bridge to be raised and lowered in halves by drawbridge mechanisms on either side. Towering a good eight feet over the water in the canal, the bridge was impressive in complexity and size.

At the moment the bridge was down, which was typical. They passed underneath it without incident and, no matter how he looked, Aelfred saw no sign of anything out of place beneath it. He was briefly tempted to try climbing out of the canal, crossing the thirty foot bridge to the opposite side and climbing back down to take a closer look under that side of things but eventually decided that would be overkill. The stories agreed the self styled dark lord accosted people on either side of the river. If it was under the bridge it should have made itself known by now.

“One bridge down,” he muttered, “one to go.”

“Plus the three drainage ditches and the place where the beacon tower casts a shadow over the canal in the afternoon.”

“Yes, and those.” Although no one had reported encountering the creature in the shadow of the beacon or by a drainage ditch. It was pretty much always under one of the canal’s two bridges.

They trudged down the waterway for another ten minutes, sweating under the noonday sun. Saffron Canal was short for one of Fionni’s waterways but it was still almost a mile and a half of muddy, uneven ground and crossing it took time. The first drainage ditch was just as unremarkable as the first bridge and they paused by it to share a drink of water from their water skin. Aelfred removed his helmet long enough to splash some of that water on his head. Then they proceeded on, Gwendolyn reminding him to be strong and vigilant.

Two minutes later they were approaching the second bridge when Aelfred caught the change, a barely perceptible shift in the brightness of the sun. It was like a thin cloud had passed overhead. He stopped immediately, motioning for his wife to do the same. She raised her voice and called out, “If there is anyone watching us, call out!”

Her voice rang with her Gift, compelling all who heard it to obey. Even for Aelfred, who knew he wasn’t being addressed and was used to hearing his wife’s Commands, there was a brief desire to comply. A true demon would have the will to easily resist. However for mortals, even those as powerful as the Fair Folk, the chances that anyone had the power to resist when they were off guard were very small. That didn’t make it impossible, and Commands could also be up for interpretation by the hearer, but an unprepared mortal resisting an unexpected Command was quite rare.

A high pitched voice with a strange raspiness to it drifted out from the bridge, asking, “What business have you with the Dark Lord Saffron?”

“We come on behalf of the Mayor of Fionni and the Commandant of the Citadel Garrison,” Aelfred replied. “They demand you leave their canal at once.”

“The Mayor and Commandant?” The voice laughed, an odd sound halfway between coughing and choking, clearly intended to convey mirth yet utterly devoid of that emotion. “Do they think this retaliation for sending my servant, the Blacklight, among them? Go back and tell them their suffering will grow a thousand times worse if they continue to displease me.”

Aelfred pivoted on his front foot foot so he could speak to his wife while keeping an eye on the bridge. “Who or what is the Blacklight?”

“I’ve never heard of it,” she said, her voice pitched low enough that it shouldn’t carry to the speaker under the bridge. “But this is Nerona. The Folk are rare here but instead they seem to have a dozen new, strange creatures and petty local legends vying to take their place every day. It could be any one of them.”

He turned back to the bridge. “Before you can torment the august leaders of Fionni you’ll first deal with us, Saffron. Your champion, this Blacklight, is unknown to me but perhaps our reputation is not as strange to you. I am Aelfred, called Herakleian by the people of Renicie and Lome, and this is my wife, Gwendolyn. We have come here from Hessex, far to the north beyond Isenlund. Five years ago we crossed into Nerona during the Griffon Rider’s Invasion and-”

Shadows from the bridge suddenly shifted and leapt forward in defiance of the sun, changing from a dark, slanted reflection of the bridge to reaching, flailing hands that careened drunkenly along the ground towards them. All the stories agreed that was the dark lord’s primary ability. It was still hard to accept it was actually happening now that he was looking at it. Aelfred felt his wife give him a push in the back and he charged forward, brandishing his ax in both hands. Behind him, Gwendolyn called, “Jump, Aelfred, jump!”

Most people distrusted those with the Commander’s Gift, fearing they would be forced to do something they didn’t wish to. That was certainly possible, but not where the Gift truly shone. The real power in the Gift lay in their way their orders pushed those that already trusted them to carry out those orders with a skill beyond what they normally possessed. As soon as he heard Gwendolyn’s order Aelfred leapt forward and across the twenty foot canal. The shadows from the bridge wavered for a moment, at first continuing to reach for his wife then turning to cross towards Aelfred as he continued to charge forward. Still born on by the power of his wife’s command Aelfred jumped again, this time focusing on going up, clearing the fence above and landing outside the canal on the streets of Fionni.

For the brief moment he was out of the canal he saw their yelling was attracting a nervous crowd. The natives were wary of getting too close to the canal and the mysterious creature within but whatever self destructive impulse drove people to stare at danger was slowly wearing down their caution. Aelfred ignored them and dashed along the canal towards the crank to raise the bridge. When they’d originally formulated the plan Aelfred hadn’t liked the roles they took but Gwendolyn insisted she would be safe. It was her belief the creature would ignore her to stop him raising the bridge.

That hope was disappointed. As he dashed along the top of the canal Aelfred could clearly see the shadow limbs turning back towards Gwendolyn, merging together into a single lumbering shadow of a creature with bulging, misshapen limbs and no discernible head. His wife quickly began backpedaling. “Show yourself, Dark Lord Saffron,” she called. “You’ve no business lurking under bridges. Step out into the light!”

“What part of Dark Lord was unclear to you?” The disembodied voice replied. Although defiant there was a rasping edge to Saffron’s tone that suggested whoever or whatever it was strained to resist the order. “Begone, strangers. I’ve no score to settle with you.”

For a moment Aelfred considered sticking to the plan and cranking the bridge up to expose whatever it was that lurked beneath it. But the shadow thing kept lurching towards Gwendolyn and all thought of ignoring that quickly left him. Aelfred leapt back over the fence and slid down the side of the canal to the bottom. His wife was still on the opposite side of the canal and the extra push of her Command was mostly faded but Aelfred figured the struts of the bridge were close enough together he could use them to cross the canal if he had to.

Five long strides took Aelfred beneath the bridge itself and he struck his ax on the nearest strut with a loud thud. “If you missed it we’re here to settle with you, your scores don’t matter to us” he snapped. “Time you showed yourself.”

“The great and terrible Dark Lord Saffron shows himself when he chooses and not before!” The shadow figure on the ground spun and swept back toward the bridge with surprising speed. The shadows under the bridge, which hadn’t been as dark as Aelfred expected, quickly darkened back to normal and then grew even thicker.

Aelfred stepped forward to meet the strange giant, slowly swinging his ax in a looping pattern to build momentum. The toes of one boot slipped into the water of the canal as he spread out and lowered his stance. “Anything you want to see today, dear?”

“I always look forward to seeing you at your best, Aelfred, just don’t let him lay a hand on you.” Although her tone was light he could see concern in the purse of her lips. She had unlooped her sling from her belt but hadn’t loaded it yet, instead addressing the shadows under the bridge again. “Come out from under that bridge, Saffron.”

The darkness on the far side of the canal shifted for a moment and the shadow brute that was lurching back towards the structure wavered like a mirage before it steadied again. Whoever was under this bridge, Aelfred was certain he or she wasn’t actually named Saffron. A correct name made a Command much stronger, as did repeated and insistent Commands, and Gwendolyn was a pretty skilled Commander. Yet Saffron was rejecting her Commands very quickly.

Aelfred figured that meant he’d have to do things his way. As the shadow giant raised a flailing arm and swung it towards him under the bridge Aelfred drew back his arm and threw his ax, the three foot ashwood handle tumbling end over end towards the space where the body casting the shadow would be. However the weapon passed right through the space without slowing. With practiced skill he tapped the ax with his Gift, the Impulse shoving the axhead so it popped up in the air and back towards him in a lazy arc. A second Impulse directed the handle neatly back into his hand. The whole process took barely two heartbeats but it was enough time for the shadow to reach him. Bracing his ax with one hand Aelfred held it down, toward the ground, to block the creature’s attack because he assumed the shadow itself must be the threat if there was no invisible creature casting it.

Instead the shadow reached under the bridge and the world around him turned black. He couldn’t see anything, not even when he held his hand up in front of his face and waved it back and forth a few times. The air wasn’t cold, a few trial swings of his ax told him there wasn’t anything solid nearby. He just couldn’t see.

“Aelfred?” A tinge of worry in his wife’s voice. “Aelfred, are you alright?”

“I feel fine, I just can’t see anything. Can you?”

“Everything but you. I-”

“Enough!” Something like a whine worked its way into Saffron’s voice. “I am the great and terrible Dark Lord Saffron and I will not suffer you presence any longer! Get out of here before I do something lasting to you!”

“Can you see anything here besides shadow?” Aelfred asked, deciding to ignore the creature in the shadows with him.

“No, just the dark.” Gwendolyn’s voice suddenly pitched up a tad and got much louder, the tone of Command in it. “You there! Yes, you! Raise the drawbridge on your side.”

Aelfred reached out with his ax handle until it clunked against a support. Then he stuck the weapon’s handle in his belt. Although the dark hampered him he was able to clamber up one of the beams and go from timber to timber until he felt them begin to move under his hands. Then he just hung on as the bridge raised. The shadows and sunlight underneath shifted as it did and Aelfred found he was beginning to see the world around him again.

“Stop that!” Saffron yelled. The note in his voice was stronger now and Aelfred realized it wasn’t whining – it was desperation. “Stop that, I insist! I am the Dark Lord Saffron, I sent my servant the Blacklight to thwart the Commandant of the Citadel, I have claimed this place and I will not stand for you to meddle any longer. Leave me in peace! I am the great and terrible Dark Lord-”

His wife interrupted, saying, “Come out from there, Saffron!”

This time Saffron didn’t recover quickly. The drawbridge reached it’s raised position with a creaking thud and the shadows quickly dissolved into the noonday sun. Only a few dense patches remained in the furthest recesses under the bridge by the banks of the canal. Aelfred found himself hanging onto one of the struts only a few feet above the ground on Gwendolyn’s side of the waterway. He dropped himself down to the ground and dusted himself off.

“You heard the lady,” Aelfred said as he started towards the densest patch of darkness still present under that side of the bridge. “Come on out!”

For good measure he kicked at a stone with his boot, sending it skipping into the shadows and forming just enough of a connection with it that he could add a second shove with his Gift, causing it to jump up to head height suddenly as it flew into the unnatural darkness. There was a yelp of surprise, rather than pain, then silence. Gwendolyn hurried up behind him, calling out, “Come out, Saffron. We know you’re not a dark lord, let this ridiculous sham rest and stop frightening the townsfolk.”

“I am!” Saffron’s voice was getting more and more unstable, its already high pitch wavering and cracking with the effort of fighting the Command. Aelfred stopped a few feet away from the unnatural darkness and listened. His ears, still sharpened from Gwendolyn’s admonition to be vigilant, caught the sound of a footstep, very light and coming towards them, followed by a strange dragging sound. “I am the dark lord Saffron!”

The voice lacked the resolve to convince a small child. His wife took a deep breath and let it out slowly. Then, in a tone that broke no refusal from man or child, she barked, “I said come out from there, Saffron!”

“I won’t!” The voice wailed, even as another step told Aelfred it was doing exactly what she’d ordered. Another dragging sound and a lumpy, misshapen outline appeared in the shadows. “I am the terr-”

A hiccup interrupted the word, followed by a cough. “The terrib-

The darkened shape was about three and a half feet tall, twisted backwards, inky blackness surrounding its hands as it clutched at the shadows. Some kind of human Gift, to be sure, but not one Aelfred knew. “The terri-”

The cause of the dragging sound became clear when the figure took another step forward, its left leg bent slightly at an unnatural angle that made it difficult to use. He’d seen many similar things in the past, bones that had broken and healed poorly. With the last step forward whatever power connected the shadows to the person holding them strained to breaking and the darkness leaked out of his hands, vanishing in the light of the noonday sun. Strained beyond endurance, a boy of no more than ten dropped to the ground in a heap and began to sob. “Terrible, terrible,” he wailed, tears cutting paths through a layer of grime and filth on his face. Dark circles lurked under his eyes and his cheeks were hollow with hunger. He threw himself facedown on the ground, sobbing as he babbled. “Terrible, I’m so sorry, please, I’m terrible, so sorry…”

He threw his hands over his head as he cried in a pose anyone who’d seen a beaten dog or tortured child could understand. Gwendolyn rushed past her husband and swooped down to try and cradle the child in her lap. Aelfred’s stomach tied itself into knots watching the way the boy cringed away from her touch, unable to comprehend something as simple as a comforting embrace.

For a moment he let his mind flee from the scene before him, wondering how the boy found enough to eat down there. Perhaps he was catching fish out of the canal. Whatever the Blacklight he mentioned was, if it even existed, the child clearly had no connection to it. There were only a few rags propped on a stick under the bridge to shelter the boy. Why hadn’t he gone to the Heralds of the Kings? They had an orphanage in Fionni. What in the name of Eternity was wrong with the people of Nerona that they hadn’t seen fit to help a boy so badly abused he played at evil to find peace?

Aelfred sat down beside his wife with a grunt. As loath as he was to admit it, that last bit was as true in Hessex as anywhere else. He sighed and shook his head. “Stars and scars, what are we supposed to do now?”

“Please…” the boy coughed again and peeked at Aelfred around his wife’s side. “Just leave me here. Or drag me off to the debtors jail if the Mayor and Commandant want money for the trouble I’ve caused. Just… don’t give me back to my brother.”

“Your brother?” Confusion vanished and cold certainty took its place. “No, we won’t do that. But, just to be certain we don’t make a mistake, tell me his name…”


Nevio staggered through the front door of his house, leaning on the wall as he finished the bottle and threw it in the general direction of the stove. The clay vessel hit the bricks and shattered but he ignored it. “Zalt, Nico, leaving me a dark house to come home to.”

He pushed off the wall, swaying to keep his balance, then turned to the door to close it behind him. As he reached out the door slammed closed in his face. Stunned, Nevio flopped back on his rear end. After a moment to gather his wits he lurched upwards, leaned against the door and pulled himself up to his feet. Then he shoved the door open and staggered out into the street. No one was there. It wasn’t very windy, either.

Maybe a dog or something was out there, running through the streets, and hit the door. Nodding to himself, Nevio pulled himself back into the house and slammed the door again leaving himself in the dark house. He pulled his cloak off, wadded it up and threw it on the stool by the door then headed towards the stove to find his oil lamp. He was fairly sure he’d left it there.

The house was cluttered and messy, slowly falling apart since their mother had died. For a time Nevio’s brother had tried to keep house but the incompetent fool failed at every turn. Nevio suspected he’d kept going down to the canals to play and fallen in one day, just one more member of his zalted family to die and leave him alone. So Nevio would just have to make do. He reached the stove and started groping around, the shadows of the room swimming past his eyes, when a deep, feminine voice said, “Nevio. Take a seat.”

For some reason he took three long steps across the room to a table he could barely see in the dark, pulled a chair out from it and sat down there. The chair on the other side was pulled far back into the corner by the window. Someone was sitting in it but she was positioned so that the moonlight spilling in the shutters beside her blinded him and made it impossible to see more than the outline of her figure and her hard, baleful green eyes. Nevio felt acid welling up in his throat and swallowed, hard. “Who are you?”

“I?” She laughed, a sound as sharp and beautiful as shards of glass in the air. “No one of importance. I come here on behalf of the Dark Lord Saffron, Nevio. Do you know why?”

“No. Who-” The door opened behind him and Nevio started to turn.

“Look at me, Nevio.” Like an iron hook the words took him by the ears and turned him back around to stare at the woman in the corner. A glint of red swept past her eyes, like a hint of demon’s fire. “You’ve wronged Saffron and we’re here to even the score. Roll up your pant leg, Nevio.”

“My what?” Even as he asked he was doing exactly as instructed, his fingers fumbling but still carrying out the task. Once he finished rough hands grabbed him under the arms, dragged him to his feet and threw him face down on the table.

The woman got up out of the chair and stepped forward, the moonlight behind her ringing her figure in an unearthly halo. She leaned down until her face, hidden behind a black veil, was only inches away. Wisps of red hair burned around her eyes like fire. “You sent Saffron a child maimed in body and mind and expected him to accept that? Shame, Nevio, shame.”

“I’m sorry, I’m sorry!” Nevio babbled, feeling shame well up in him in bitter waves. “I didn’t know. Nico was always a stupid child but-”

“Silence,” she hissed. “We’re not here for your excuses. Taking full repayment for all you’ve done would take far too long so we’ll just take a tithe of it for the moment. You’d best behave yourself after, Nevio, or we’ll come and collect the rest. Now hold still.”

The woman rose to her full height, her green eyes staring down at him without remorse or pity. He heard whoever or whatever was behind him shifting. There was a grunt and a wet crack then his leg exploded in pain.

Aelfred and Gwendolyn left him screaming in his house, their vengeance done. All they could do now was make sure Nico never needed the Dark Lord Saffron again.


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