Check Out the 2025 Haunted Blog Crawl!

Reminder that four enterprising authors, myself included, have put together four spooky short stories for your enjoyment this Halloween! Be sure to check them out for your reading edification!

Siren Song by Nate Chen:
https://natechenpublications.com/2025/10/18/siren-song-haunted-blog-crawl-2025/

Escape by S. Kirk Pierzchala:
https://skirkpierzchala.substack.com/publish/post/176365260?r=2e33oq&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=false

Tell Them to Bury Me Shallow by From Under the Terebinth:
https://fromundertheterebinth.wordpress.com/2025/10/18/tell-them-to-bury-me-shallow/#more-22

General by Hannah Lannswift:
https://blog.reedsy.com/short-story/bviebi/

2025 Haunted Blog Crawl Master Index

Welcome back to the 2025 Haunted Blog Crawl! The complete list of stories submitted to this project is found in this post! Thank you to everyone who submitted and everyone who takes the time to peruse these stories! This year’s submissions are:

Siren Song by Nate Chen:
https://natechenpublications.com/2025/10/18/siren-song-haunted-blog-crawl-2025/

Escape by S. Kirk Pierzchala:
https://skirkpierzchala.substack.com/publish/post/176365260?r=2e33oq&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=false

Tell Them to Bury Me Shallow by From Under the Terebinth:
https://fromundertheterebinth.wordpress.com/2025/10/18/tell-them-to-bury-me-shallow/#more-22

General by Hannah Lannswift:
https://blog.reedsy.com/short-story/bviebi/

One Week Left!

A brief reminder that there’s one week left until the Haunted Blog Crawl submission window is closed! Please try to have a link to your story posted as a reply to the original post (or to this one) by the end of the 17th! If you’re late you can’t get in!

Okay, I’ll most likely go back and add your link to the master list. But I can’t promise it will be in a timely fashion.

Find the full details on the Haunted Blog Crawl in the original post here:

One Month to Go

This is a brief reminder that the deadline to submit a short story for the 2025 Haunted Blog Crawl is one month from today! The full details for submissions are found on the original post!

The Drownway Chapter Twenty Six – The Inevitable

Previous Chapter

One of the rarest Gifts given to men was the Gift of Artifice, the power to take a bit of another person’s Gift and hide it away in an object so that anyone could use it. In his brief time in Nerona Adalai had seen two such Artifacts. To the average person such a thing was indistinguishable from any other object of their kind but to someone with the Gift of Arms they were quite obvious.

The sword he’d grabbed was an Artifact.

There were other hints it wasn’t his sword as well. It was a touch heavier than his rapier, the blade was short, leaf shaped and made of bronze and his own weapon was still in its sheath. In fact, if he hadn’t been so disoriented he might not ever have grabbed it. Now that he was holding it he was more disoriented than ever.

To an Arminger an Artifact was even more complicated than a normal object, since normal stuff only picked up powerful impressions if they were used constantly by a single person for a decent period of time. If a thing changed hands the old users’ impressions faded away while the new slowly overwrote them. An Artifact contained traces of at least two people all the time, the Artificer who made it and the person who’s Gift was used to create it.

To make matters even worse, most Artifacts needed to be recharged. That required an Artificer as well as another instance of the Gift stored in said Artifact – and they didn’t have to be the same two people who created it originally. Those distinctions didn’t make much of a difference to most people. To an Arminger they could make the Artifact basically unusable, as the conflicting impressions drowned out any other thoughts from the Arminger’s mind.

Fortunately the sword he’d discovered among the remains of the Deep’s prison wasn’t that complex. He only caught the afterimage of two people from it. The sword was also quite old, so he wasn’t able to tell much about either person, whether they’d been male or female, young or old. The only thing he knew for sure was one of them was a Thunder Hand, as that was the Gift the blade contained.

That said, he strongly suspected the blade belonged to someone who hated the Benthic. As soon as he stepped out of the fog and his eyes landed on Captain Trill he felt a surge of hostility flow out of the sword. He’d never felt such a powerful impression from any object before, Artifact or not.

A hand fell on his shoulder and he spun to find Cassian staring at him with a bewildered look. “What happened to you?”

Adalai opened his mouth, about to explain the vision he’d seen, then stopped himself. “It would take too long to explain.”

Cassian glanced up and Adalai followed his line of sight to discover an enormous, bloated Benthic dragging the last of its hundred foot long tail through a newly formed hole in the ceiling. “I hate to say it but we probably won’t have time for it anyway. Marta’s keeping us dry for the moment but if that thing breaks her shield the Linnorm’s getting doused and that’s our best weapon off the table.”

The sword was incensed. Adalai glanced down at it and realized it was a tool created for exactly this kind of situation. At first he wasn’t sure what it was trying to do, the concept didn’t make a lot of sense to someone who wasn’t used to an electrical Gift like the Thunder Hand, but he had a sudden flash of insight when he glanced at Marta to see how she was doing. As he looked at her he thought of Braxton.

Who was a Thunder Heart, who could breathe under water somehow because his body was living lightning. That was when the pieces clicked into place.

“Have Marta let me out then shrink the dome down to a bubble and make it as solid and layered as she can. It’s going to get bumpy.”

Cassian gave him a skeptical look. “You have an idea?”

“Not an idea.” He hefted the bronze blade. “This.”

“Well… better than nothing.” The Ironhand didn’t look convinced but he moved off to do as he was asked.

There were many things Adalai had learned back home that the people of Nerona were totally ignorant of, a shortcoming he’d learned not to hold against them. Their Gifts gave them the power to see and do many things he’d never dreamed of, either. Yet more often than not it turned out that the science he’d learned in school and the preternatural gifts of Nerona overlapped in the most unexpected ways.

Electrolysis, for example.

He wasn’t sure how masters of Nerona’s lightning wielding Gifts had discovered the fact that water contained oxygen and that you could use electricity to separate the air from the water. Much less how they’d done it without exploding all the hydrogen created as a byproduct. Yet someone out there must have put all the pieces together because the longer he held onto the sword the clearer its function became. Some mad Artificer had built it for the sole purpose of cleaving water into air, allowing its owner to breathe and fight the Benthic on equal footing.

Adalai wasn’t sure how exactly it did that. Fortunately Artifacts didn’t need him to understand all the details of their function. He just needed to tell it to start cutting water and it would. Just as well since the bronze blade didn’t have the same feel to it as a sword that had spent years in the hand of a fencing master. It couldn’t guide him through a duel.

Yet it did still have some guidance for him. Adalai could tell that this wasn’t the ideal situation to use it in, for example. His own understanding of chemistry and physics told him that the stunt he was thinking of pulling was going to be pretty rough. He might not survive it.

For a second Adalai wondered if the Linnorm still smelled inevitability clinging to him. It had been a long time since Karoushi told him he would find his way home if he continued down the path he’d chosen. He wasn’t sure if he was still on that path.

Years in Nerona had changed him quite a bit. And if he did still carry a touch of the inevitable about him there was no telling if it came from the same promise Karoushi made him at the corners of Eternity. Perhaps he walked a different, equally inexorable path to a far different destination.

There was an easy way to find out.

He stepped out through Marta’s shield bubble, letting the cold water of the deep sea pass over him for a brief moment, then raised the sword and nudged it to life. The blade cut through water with a sharp crack. He pushed it to do more. For a moment foam filled the water around him then Adalai flinched as the water around him lit up, a brilliant lightning bolt filling the cavern.

The original purpose of weapons like these was to be thrown into the water just ahead of its user. They would burrow into the water leaving a corridor of breathable air. Adalai couldn’t tell how the man who originally carried the bronze blade intended to keep the water from replacing all the air once it was created. Presumably there was another Artifact or someone with a Gift to handle that.

Regardless, Adalai found himself almost throwing the sword out of his hand as he used it since it wanted to bury itself into the seafloor again. He had to actively work against the impulse as he cut the water around him into its component gasses. It got worse as the pressure around him built.

It was impossible to guess how much liquid the massive lava chamber held but what Adalai was certain of was that the water would take up much more room as gas than as liquid. With only a comparatively small hole in the roof to escape from, things got tricky fast. Adalai felt his ears pop once, then twice, as he swung the sword around him in larger and larger arcs and the pressure in the chamber built. He felt a strange sensation, as if the ocean floor hiccuped. Then there was an abrupt sensation of movmenet and he felt himself being swept up in a rushing current, as the sound of crackling electricity was replaced with a roaring waterfall.

Adalai felt himself tumbling along, water around him and to his back, blade still cleaving apart the sea. He would have lost it if he hadn’t already grabbed the hilts in a two fisted death grip earlier. He wasn’t sure how long it went on. Looking back on it, maybe twelve seconds passed from the moment he began slicing apart the water to the moment he willed the sword to stop cutting. In that time a lot changed.

For starters, when he opened his eyes he found he’d been thrown out of the cavern over the sea floor. The explosive rush of air and water had not only broken the roof of the cave it had thrown everything within across half the ocean. Marta had formed a solid, shimmering sphere out of her shield. It looked like she had shrunk it enough that the seven of them inside were kept from jostling and, although no one looked comfortable, they also didn’t look like they’d broken anything from jostling as they rode the geyser.

The Benthic that didn’t have the benefit of Marta’s shield hadn’t been so fortunate. One drifted in the water a few dozen feet away, her body unmoving, twisted into a painful spiral shape. The Matriarch had been more fortunate, perhaps because of her greater size. She drifted by the gaping opening in the sea floor a few hundred feet away, dark eyes glinting with sinister reflections in the murk of the ocean bed.

To his horror she reached out one oversized hand, grabbed the corpse of one of her daughters and shoved half of it into her mouth. As she chewed her eyes turned up and met his.

Adalai twitched himself around in the water and pointed the bronze blade at her. It was a show of force, yes, but an empty one. He could tell the Artifact had lost most of its potency. It might contain enough power to cleave a few more gallons of seawater but no more. The majority of the weapon’s power was spent and it wouldn’t be restored until another Artificer and another Thunder Hand collaborated to recharge it.

Unfortunately the Matriarch didn’t buy his bluff. She pushed the last of the morsel into her mouth and lifted her imposing bulk up off the ocean floor and started towards them.

Marta’s shield bubble vanished and Trill’s guards zipped out of it, one breaking off to collect him, then all eight of them made their best time upwards towards the surface. As they drew close together Cassian called out, “Was that supposed to kill them?”

“Mostly I was just hoping we’d get out of there,” Adalai admitted.

“Well it worked but we’re not out of the woods yet.”

“What are we not out of?” Trill asked. “It didn’t translate.”

“Just swim,” Cassian replied. “Unless you think the eight of us can kill a Matriarch.”

“We can. One or two of us may even survive.” She pointed towards the stone spire that housed the dragon’s lair. “Better to fight from arid land. She is too large and heavy to fight well out of the water, even my troops will be able to outrun her there.”

“Doesn’t leave us much room to maneuver,” Adalai muttered.

“We can deal with that,” Verina said. “The advantages are still mostly on our side.”

They breached the surface a few moments later and the humans began to help the Benthic up away from the waves. It was late in the evening and the stars were beginning to show. Adalai took them in for a moment, wondering if the King of Stars had left a new omen there for them.

“Get up as high as you can,” Cassian said. “I assume a Matriarch can throw water as well as the rest of you and the more we make her work the better.”

“Get back in the water.”

He froze. “What?”

Adalai pointed upwards, towards a gleaming star far brighter than the others that pierced through the dusk. “Falling star. Get back in the water before it hits.”

Marta followed his finger and squinted. “Shooting stars almost never fall to earth, I wouldn’t -”

“I saw the King of Stars not five minutes ago and he was not happy, get back in the water before he gets here or I’m not responsible for what happens.” Without waiting for a reply Adalai scampered across the small stone island towards the far shore. It took less than a minute. In that time the falling star had grown noticeably larger.

Once he got down to the water again he pulled off his cloak and tied it around his waist, since it looked like he would have to swim on his own. He managed to wade out to knee deep before Cassian called out, “Wait!”

The others were coming over the crest of the island behind him. “Change your mind?”

“The Matriarch surfaced long enough to look at the sky and left again,” Trill said. “If she isn’t willing to stay here, I’m not.”

“Then let’s get going.”

“Where?” Cassian asked.

“Far away.” Adalai looked up to see the falling star had already grown to the size of his thumb. “Let’s hope it’s far enough.”

They made it half a mile when the star hit the spire and a wave the size of a mountain swept them away.

Open Call – The 2025 Haunted Blog Crawl

Ladies and gentlemen, readers of all ages, welcome!

Last year I inaugurated the Haunted Blog Crawl, an opportunity for many and various indie authors to promote themselves and hone their writing skills by sharing a spooky story for Halloween. It was a bit of a last minute idea and, although I did my best to promote it, only two other authors took part. This year we’re getting an earlier start.

So what is the Haunted Blog Crawl? Simply put, it’s an opportunity to do a fiction exchange. Each participant will write a story and post it in whatever venue they maintain on the Internet, be it a blog, Wattpad or Substack, and link to it in the comments of this post. Then, on Halloween proper, they will post a complete list of all the available stories to that same venue as the 2025 Haunted Blog Crawl. That’s it! That’s the process!

Okay, a few more guidelines are probably going to be helpful. Here are a few things to keep in mind.

  • The story should be a minimum of 2,000 words. That’s the baseline for a solid short story. Not to say you can’t get a good story out of less but good 10-15 minute read is generally ideal for a spooky story. It’s hard to maintain the mood for longer. By the same token there’s no upper limit to the length, since this isn’t being published in print, but I would suggest an upper limit of about 8,000 words for a story intended to be finished in a single sitting.
  • The story should be spooky. It could have a ghost, werewolf or other classic monster. It could turn out to be a man in a rubber mask. We could discover that the evils of men are the most frightening things there are. The exact form isn’t that important so long as the story could send a chill down your spine.
  • Try to keep things PG-13. Halloween stories have a bit of an edge to them but my hope is that this project will be available to readers of all ages. Restraint in ghostly tales is generally the better way to get the desired mood anyway.
  • Have your story completed, posted to your blog, Substack, Wattpad or similar publishing platform and linked in a comment on this post by Friday, October 17th. That will give me plenty of time to put all the stories and links together into a master list.
  • Return to this blog on Friday, October 24th and I will post that master list.
  • Remember to post that master list to your blog, Substack, Wattpad or similar publishing platform as the 2025 Haunted Blog Crawl on Friday, October 31st.

If you have further questions please ask them in the comments. I look forward to hearing from you all!

The Drownway Chapter Twelve – The Mines

Previous Chapter

Whatever the half buried building had been before the sea took the Drownway, Adalai presumed it wasn’t intended as a living space. Although the doors that had once occupied the entrance were now long rotted away the sheer size of the opening they left behind suggested it was some kind of public building with grandiose double doors. There were no windows at ground level. The handful that were visible in the poor light were all located overhead, near the point where the walls met the roof.

Other than a hole the size of a barrel in the front wall, about ten feet from the doorway, said doorway was the only way to see the world outside. Much of the building’s interior was just as obscured. A little light came in through the doorway and a touch more peeked through holes in the tiled roof. At least the contrast in the lighting was in their favor. The rain was beginning to let up and, although it was hardly bright, the skies outside were still lighter than things inside. So Adalai posted himself by the break in the wall and peered out, watching for the Benthic to make themselves known again.

While he waited he found himself absently rummaging through his bag. His fingers had just closed on a packet of jerky when a clatter of stones inside the building caught his attention. He blinked twice as he turned his attention inward. His eyes rapidly adjusted to the change in lighting and he discovered that Cassian was digging through a pile of dirty reddish rocks as Marta held a lantern aloft to illuminate his work. As far as Adalai could tell there was nothing particularly important about the rocks. He glanced at Verina but she was watching the doorway.

“Cassian,” he hissed. “What are you doing?”

“Do you know where this is?” Cassian threw down the stones he’d been rummaging through, got to his feet and dashed towards the back of the cavernous structure.

A moment of panic washed over him. Up until this point the Ironhand had been a remarkably clear headed decision maker. Now it looked almost like a madness had taken hold at him. Adalai was not the only one who had noticed there was something off with the other man. Marta followed closely behind him, a lantern she’d just lit in one hand.

“Cassian?” She caught up to him before had gone more than fifteen feet and stopped him with a hand on the shoulder. “Where are you going?”

Instead of answering he took the arm holding the lantern and pushed it upwards to illuminate more of the ceiling. Adalai sucked in a deep breath as it revealed a set of heavy timbers bracing up not a stone tiled roof but a dirt tunnel at the back of the building.

Cassian put a finger to his lips and they stoool in silence for a long moment. As his heartbeat quieted Adalai caught the soft sloshing sound of waves drifting out of the passage behind them. “This is an old iron mine,” Cassian whispered. “The tunnels go deep enough that they must have flooded when the ocean overtook it.”

“We’re outflanked,” Marta replied in the same tone. “Even if the dragon can’t fit through whatever passages lead in here his pet Benthic can.”

Adalai glanced back out through the hole in the wall. “They haven’t come this way yet.”

“What was that?” Cassian sounded bewilderd. “Chew your food. Is this really the time to stop for a snack?”

Adalai started, suddenly aware that he had a hunk of jerky in his hands and more of it between his teeth. He chewed twice more and swallowed. “What…”

“It’s the dragon’s presence,” Verina said, never taking her eyes off the doorway. “They are hunger incarnate and the power of their need manifests in mortal creatures near them in the form of insatiable gluttony. There may be a way here underwater but the dragon is coming by land. The Linnorm is watching it.”

With an effort of will Adalai shoved the jerky back into his bag saying, “Does that mean you can manifest him again?”

“No. But he’s still here and able to see the world even if he cannot influence our part of it.”

“Well tell him to watch the mine shaft then,” Cassian said. “Just because the dragon isn’t coming that way doesn’t mean its minions aren’t. The last thing we need is getting caught in a pincer.”

Adalai cast a quick glance out the doorway, made sure there were no signs of the creatures approaching, then knelt down by the Slavic woman. “Are you well? I’ve never seen an Invoker who reacts like you when a spirit they’ve Invoked is injured.”

“Few bind a spirit to themselves as the yagas do, and for exactly that reason,” she explained, a hand absently rubbing her shoulder at the place her tattoo ran over it. “I’ll recover, assuming we survive the night. Even with the Linnorm weakened he does much for me. I am sure I don’t feel the influence of the hunger to the same extent you do, for example.”

“Adalai,” Cassian hissed, “they’re here.”

Moving quickly, Adalai joined him at the entrance, taking position on the opposite side of the empty doorway. If the sea dragon had sent any of its servants around to the sunken mineshaft it wasn’t evident. There were at least twenty Benthic massing at the bottom of the hill, although it was still impossible to get a full count of the number in the faint light. More concerning than the numbers was the massive globe of water two of the Benthic levitated above them.

“Do we have away to avoid getting washed away by that?” Adalai asked.

Cassian glanced at Marta, who had left the lantern at the back of the building behind one of the rock pile and moved over to the hole in the wall. “What’s our Shieldbearer’s opinion?”

“Not possible for me. I’ve never been good at creating barriers that last for a long period of time, maybe fifteen seconds, though I can make one big enough to cover the building if that helps.”

“Not particularly,” Cassian said. “Switch places with me. Use the shield to keep they from swarming the door so Adalai can fight them one on one or two at a time. I’ll do my best to pick one or two off from over there.”

It was a good plan. Adalai had worked with other bravo captains in the past and he found the speed and decisiveness Cassian displayed to be better than the average. He made good use of people’s abilities as well. However the legends say that the dragon is a creature more cunning than any man. The sea dragon that had pursued them put the proof to those tales.

As the Benthic grouped together and came charging forward in their bizarre crawling run there was a deafening crash and the building’s roof shook in under the weight of the dragon’s coils suddenly slamming into its tiles. One of the holes overhead caved in further as the dragon’s head shoved the tiles out of the way.

For a breathless moment Adalai watched the debris fall in slow motion, his mind scrambling to come up with some idea of what he should be doing. Stone tiles were raining down towards Verina. The sea dragon’s neck bulged with water as it prepared an attack. The Benthic continued towards them, heedless of the danger from man or beast.

A flash of terror lit Verina’s face for an instant before a brighter light subsumed it in verdant luminescence. The heat haze silhouette of the Linnorm filled the room for a brief second. One head swatted the debris from the air while the other butted the sea dragon on the chin, spoiling the serpent’s aim. Then the green light was gone again, and the Great Linnorm with it.

In that moment Adalai clearly saw what had to happen. He grabbed Marta and spun her around, pushing her shield up at an angle with his free hand while frantically gesturing from the dragon to the doorway with the point of his sword. There wasn’t time for anything more but thankfully Marta understood what he was getting at.

The dragon had already begun spewing water but, with its head out of position, the torrent flew uselessly towards the corner of the room. As the serpent swung its head back towards them the dome of Marta’s shield appeared, sending most of the water cascading off and out the doorway towards the encroaching Benthic. Cassian threw his remaining daggers at them – in the conventional fashion, not with his Gift – and dashed towards Verina. She had collapsed again and this time she wasn’t even twitching.

The sea dragon ran out of water but this time it wasn’t done. Instead of closing its mouth it lunged forward and did its best to sink its fangs into Marta’s shield dome. Adalai expected its teeth to just slide off the dome but he’d underestimated the abilities of a dragon. A sickly gray shadow spread through the dome’s bright white light from the points where the teeth touched it. Marta cried out and the dome vanished.

The after image of the dome was still fading when the dragon struck again, diving towards Marta, its teeth snapping. She managed to get her physical shield between them as she tried to dodge but the dragon’s horse sized head still struck a glancing blow. Adalai braced her and she kept her feet but he heard a sickening popping sound in the process. There wasn’t time to worry about that.

By reaching down into the building the dragon had left itself exposed. Long, pulsing gills flapped open and closed along its neck. Adalai put the tip of his sword against the dragon’s flank and pushed it forward, scraping along the creature’s gleaming pearlescent scales until it caught in the gills. As soon as the blade was in place he put both hands on the hilt and shoved as hard as he could. The sword plunged in up to the hilt.

Adalai left it there. He sprinted towards the back of the building, Marta already a half step in front of him. Cassian was shaking Verina but she remained unresponsive. Adalai came in and scooped her into a shoulder carry. Once she was off his hands Cassian pulled out his vial of quicksilver and broke it open. As the dragon thrashed around in agony, tearing the roof apart and threatening to topple the whole building, Cassian twitched a finger twice and pulled the quicksilver out of its container and shot it at the serpent in a trio of deadly droplets that splattered across the creature’s gills with an odd hissing sound. Or maybe that was also the dragon expressing its agony.

“To the mineshafts,” Cassian declared.

They hurried deeper into the building as quickly as they could. As they passed the lantern Marta had set down she slung her mace and took it up again, illuminating their path down into the depths. They had not gone very deep into the mines before. Now they discovered that there was not much deeper to go. They barely ran ten seconds before they came to a deep hole at the end of the tunnel.

There might have been more tunnel beyond the downward shaft but rubble and rotted timber filled it, blocking the way. The downward shaft ended in a dark sheet of water some fifteen feet below. As they stared at it Adalai felt his stomach rumble.

Cassian looked around, considering the tunnel, looking for something, though Adalai couldn’t guess what. Adalai adjusted Verina slightly and tried to unbuckle one of the extra swords he’d strapped to his pack. As he worked he said, “Quicksilver is a poison, yes?”

“If you breath it, yes,” Cassian said. “It can kill a man after a few hours or days, though dragons can supposedly eat anything so I doubt they’d be poisoned easily, especially by a kind of silver.”

Nerona hadn’t discovered the table of elements and Adalai didn’t think it was the time to try and explain it to a blacksmith. “Then I suppose we just have to stab it.”

Cassian looked back at Marta. “How’s your arm? Can you make a shield to block the tunnel for a few seconds?”

She looked down at her shield arm, which hung at an unnatural angle. She set the lantern down and put her free hand on the shield’s edge. “A few.”

“Help me with this, Adalai.” Cassian gestured to a fallen timber and together they dragged it over to a wall and braced it there. Cassian climbed up the timber, stripped off his gloves, placed his two hands on the timber holding up the ceiling and closed his eyes.

Adalai’s stomach growled fiercely, the noise almost enough to drown out the sound of scales scraping over stone. The eel head of the sea dragon pushed into the small circle of light cast by the lantern. Marta held up her shield, lifting it as much by the rim as by the arm it was strapped to. The dragon’s lips spat a small globe of water at her and knocked her flat. A second and third attack were fired at Adalai, though he avoided them by ducking behind some of the rubble from the cave in.

The dragon turned it’s attention to Cassian. With a yell he pulled his hands away from the timber and scrambled away from the dragon. It lunged after him, hissing. The Ironhand took three steps, turned back and throw the nails in his hands at the dragon. The timber overhead he’d taken them from groaned then collapsed.

For a brief moment Adalai saw fear in the dragon’s eyes. Then it vanished under the crushing weight of stone.

The Drownway Chapter Three – The Dagger and the Shield

Previous Chapter

“Did you train both the Conde and his cousin, Maestro Fiore?” Adalai weighed a long, triangular bladed rapier in one hand, the question almost an afterthought.

“I did,” the swordsmaster replied. “Both were fine students, at least for men who never went to war, but not particularly remarkable in the grand scheme of things.”

That matched what Captain Bellini told him. Adalai took a few experimental lunges with the blade, diving into the weapon with his Gift. A sense of singleminded purpose washed over him. Adalai let the Purpose of the sword drive him through a series of moves, thrusting, disengaging, parrying and slashing as he fought an imaginary enemy. His empty off hand twitched on occasion.

Fiore tutted and shook his head. “You’re quite gifted, signore,” the swordsmaster said, tugging on his graying beard in a thoughtful manner. “Even with one of my manuals you could not learn the movements so well. If I didn’t know better I’d say I trained you myself. However I still don’t believe this weapon could have been used by Signore Teodoro to kill the Conde.”

“It was found stabbed into his chest, Maestro,” the Captain pointed out from his place on the side of the practice yard.

“Oh, I believe you, Captain,” Fiore hastened to say. “It is not a question of the weapon but rather the wielder.”

“Signore Teodoro stood to inherit the Conde’s title if he died,” Adalai pointed out. “That’s certainly enough motive for murder, don’t you think?”

“Motive,” the swordsmaster agreed. “But not capability. As you yourself may have noticed, the method I teach is a mixed form suited to both cut and thrust. However the sword used to kill the Conde was forged exclusively for the thrust. It has no edge to speak of. Without an edge on his blade Signore Teodoro could not have made full use of his training and thus he could not have beaten his cousin in a duel, perhaps not even with the advantage of surprise. The two of them were very evenly matched.”

“But you just said that it looked like I had learned the method from you directly,” Adalai said. “I have never studied your methods, Maestro. Not from you and not from any of the Maestroes you have approved to teach in your name. I only gained an understanding of it from this blade, as is my Gift.”

Fiore’s eyebrows bobbed up in surprise, practically disappearing under the brim of his cap. “That is odd, I admit. There is no reason for one of my students to use a triangular blade.”

“Unless the goal is to look like the killer was something other than one of your students,” Captain Bellini said. “Then it is an admirable choice.”

“Perhaps.” Fiore drew his own sword and gestured for Adalai to meet him. As their blades crossed he began explaining. “The problem is that this is not just any sword, it is the weapon used to kill the Conde de Vermillion. The Conde was found with his own sword in hand was he not?”

“He was,” Adalai confirmed. The slow winding and binding of blades triggered faint impressions from the murder weapon. He allowed them to guide his arm through a series of beats, disengages and feints. To his surprise he found the movements rather difficult.

“Thus he must have crossed blades with his killer,” Fiore said, effortlessly manipulating the other man’s weapon. “As you can see, the nature of a triangular blade puts me at an advantage. The edges and surfaces are easier to manipulate in the bind, a skill which my methodology places a strong emphasis on.”

“You could beat any swordsmaster who fought you using such a weapon?” Bellini asked.

“If they dueled me using my own method. There are other methods that make better uses of such a blade that would be difficult for even one such as I to deal with. But that is not a skill the Conde or his cousin have studied.” To emphasize his point Fiore twisted his blade into a looping flourish that wrenched Adalai’s blade around out of his hand.

Just before the blade left his hand a powerful urge drove Adalai to lunge forward into Fiore’s space, his off hand darting forward to slam into the swordsmaster’s side, just under the ribs. Exactly where the Conde had been stabbed.

For a moment the tableau held. Then the two combatants broke apart, Fiore rubbing absently at his side. “That was interesting,” Bellini said. “What does it mean?”

The swordsmaster studied Adalai with new interest. “As I already said, the Conde and his cousin were quite evenly matched. They even had the same weakness. They tended to overexpose their flanks during certain movements, one of which is the binding flourish I just used. It is a good moment to exploit if you have a dagger.”

“How was it you were caught by this move, Maestro?” The Captain asked.

“Signoire Carpathea was not using a dagger so I was not expecting such an attack.”

“But the Conde was not killed using a dagger,” Adalai said.

“No, but a steady hand could drive the heavier blade into the dagger wound after the deed was done to disguise how the killing blow was struck.” Bellini heaved a sigh and crossed to Adalai, taking the sword from him. “We have enough, I think. It is a matter of succession to the Conde’s seat so it will have to go before the Prince’s pactmaker in the weeks. We will raise the issue then.”

Adalai sighed and shook his arms out. It was always a bit unsettling to dive so deep into an object he could mimic the skills of its original owner. Fiore watched him warily. “How many methods of fighting do you think you could learn, Signore Carpathea?”

“No more than most people,” Adalai replied. “I can pull some skills from a well used weapon, sure, but I forget them quickly if I don’t put in the usual amount of practice and regular drilling to maintain them.”

The swordsmaster grunted. “A pity. You have a great deal of physical talent. If you could retain what you just demonstrated and expand your combat methods in the same way you could become fulminatos.”

One thing that had caused Adalai no end of grief in the last three years was the fact that the Gift he’d taken from the King of Dreams didn’t help him with languages at all. “I’m sorry, Maestro, what was that?”

He shot Adalai an apologetic look. “Forgive me, I forget you are not from here. It is a term we use for those uniquely gifted in the ways of war, particularly those who’s influence goes beyond their lifetimes.”

Adalai felt himself shrink back a little bit, the praise making him uncomfortable. “You flatter me, Maestro.”

“Perhaps. I would be willing to take you as a student if you wished to find out how much I am flattering you. I have lost one student recently and it seems I may lose another so there is a place for you if you want it.” He offered Adalai a polite bow, then gave a slightly more deferential one to the Captain. “I will take my leave, signores.”

“Your presence was of great help,” Bellini replied.

Once the swordsmaster was gone Adalai let himself slump a bit. Nerona’s martial personalities set his nerves jangling for reasons he hadn’t figured out yet. Perhaps it was a side effect of the Arminger’s Gift. More likely it was just because he’d never been around people so acclimated to violence in his previous life. Whatever it was it made him very tired.

Bellini slapped him on the back. “Ready to call it a day?”

“I told you, I’m leaving town for a few days, possibly forever. I’m not leaving until I’ve looked over everything you’ve got here.”

The Captain pulled a disapproving face. “You know, Fionni was able to arrest and punish criminals long before we had the services of a deep Arminger. If you are setting out on a dangerous journey perhaps you should spend the rest of your day making preparations.”

“I’m half bravo, Bellini, I’m always ready to travel.”

The Captain huffed out an exasperated sigh and set off towards the entrance to the nearby gatehouse. “That’s your problem, Adalai. Men who are only half of something are ill suited to the level of focus you put on things. You say you cannot learn a method of fighting unless you drill it. I’m telling you that you cannot be half bravo and half city guard for the same reason – no one has enough time to devote themselves to both.”

It was Adalai’s turn to look sour. “Perhaps not, but I just do what I can. The people of Fionni were good to me when I arrived with no clothes, no food and no understanding of the language.”

“Except for the ones who wanted to execute you,” Bellini muttered.

Adalai choose to ignore him. “I just want to pay it back.”

“If you feel you must.” The Captain led him in to the armory and began unlocking the arming chest where the Guard kept weapons of a suspicious nature, be they magical or criminal. He returned the Conde’s murder weapon to storage there.

Adalai peeked around his shoulder. In fairness to Bellini the kind of crime that he was useful in solving was pretty rare. It needed a murder weapon or some tool used in a theft left at the scene and that was pretty rare. So he was surprised to see a large, scale shaped shield and flanged mace had been added since the last time he had visited six days ago. “Captain…”

“Those aren’t criminal weapons,” Bellini said as he wound a chain around the sword hilt and locked it in place.

“Artifacts of unknown function?”

“They were seized from a Hexton who had entered the city through a canal, avoiding the gate tax. They’ll be returned if she can find a bondsman who will sign for her.”

That caught his attention. Adalai didn’t know much about Hessex, save for the fact that it was a nation somewhere far to the northwest. But it was quite unheard of for women of any nation around Nerona to travel alone. Even Neronan women didn’t do it. As far as he knew only the women of Thebes had a reputation for such endeavors and even then it was rare. “Is it certain her arms are not Artifacts?”

Bellini paused, one hand on the lid of the chest. “They haven’t been examined or appraised. Do you have a reason to believe they are?”

Adalai scrutinized the shield, which was carefully painted with a green valley and a trio of stone towers against a blue sky. “It just seems quite well made. She must be a woman of some importance yet she came here alone.”

“Not quite.” Bellini gestured to the shield. “That is the coat of arms of one of those Hexton traveling clans. She said bandits wiped out most of them a week ago. They were supposed to meet in Fionni if anything went wrong so here she is, hopefully not for long.”

Adalai brushed his fingers across the shield absently, not expecting much. The Hexton’s were not big fans of Artifice. However as soon as his fingers made contact with the steel he felt himself whisked away. He found himself standing under the dome at the Corners of Eternity for a brief moment. The Kings were absent but he felt the presence of Karoushi looming behind him with her dreadful certainty. Then Bellini snatched his hand away from the shield and he was back in the gatehouse.

“What happened?” The Captain demanded. “You just froze for a moment. I have never seen you react to anything like that before. What is it?”

For a brief moment Adalai stared at the shield in confusion. Was it a message of some kind? The Kings at the Corners were well known in Nerona but whatever Karoushi was no one on the twin peninsulas had heard of her. At least not by that name. It was the first time he had seen any indication of that particular supernatural force since he came to Nerona. “I’m not sure, Bellini, but I think it was an omen. How much does she owe for the gate tax?”

“Twenty lira.”

“Take it from my pay. I will stand as bondsman.”

“I did not take you for such a man!” The Captain practically snarled.

“What?”

“I know you are not Neronan, my friend, but certainly it is not looked on well when a strange man buys the freedom of a woman he is not related to in any nation?”

When Bellini put it that way Adalai realized it did make him look like some kind of slaver or pimp. “That’s not my intention! I just think she shouldn’t be locked away while she waits for her family.”

“She may be safer in the woman’s cells than alone in common lodgings.” Bellini chewed on his bottom lip. “You will speak to her and, if she agrees, then you may stand as bondsman. But otherwise she must remain here.”

It was a fair enough of a requirement and, to be perfectly honest, he wanted to meet this Hexton woman himself. If Karoushi was invested in her somehow perhaps he needed to be involved. At least if he wanted to go home. So the two of them trudged to the Meridian gatehouse, where the women’s cells were, and paid a visit to Marta Towers.

Like the handful of Hexton women Adalai had seen in Fionni she was fair haired and athletic. She wore a simple dress with a floral patterned cloth over her hair. Two braids hung down to below her waist. She studied Adalai with piercing blue eyes as Bellini introduced him. Once he was done she asked, in slow, accented but intelligible Neronan, “What would you have me do if you become my bondsman?”

“Do?” Adalai was a bit thrown off by the question. “How do you mean?”

“You intend for me to do something until you recoup your cost or my family comes and pays back the money, do you not? Will you keep me as your nightly servant?”

It made him uncomfortable how quickly everyone went to that kind of assumption. “No. I was shown great charity when I first came to Fionni and I wanted to show the same to others. I cannot even expect to keep you near me because I am leaving the city tomorrow and you must remain here to meet your family.”

Her eyes narrowed slightly. “You are leaving soon? Where will you go?”

“I am joining an expedition that will make passage through a dangerous route called the Drownway to the city of Renicie.”

“Kismet,” she whispered. “Then I must go with you.”

Adalai blinked once, looked over at an equally baffled Bellini, then back to Marta. “What?”

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Writing Vlog – 07-17-2024

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