The Drownway Chapter Fourteen – The Gulf of Lum

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It turned out they could all breathe water, presumably just one of the side effects of eating the sea dragon. That had its uses, the most obvious being salvation from sufication. It also made it possible for them to explore the flooded shaft for as long as it took to get back to the surface.

Marta was skeptical about abandoning their digging efforts but the air in the tunnel was already growing poor. The roof hadn’t caved in again but it was looking more and more unstable by the minute. Ultimately, Cassian made the decision to abandon the attempt to dig out and chose to swim, both because of the risk of a cave-in and because of the air situation.

Convincing the others to go along with this idea wasn’t easy. Even after they’d all climbed down the rope and stuck their heads under the water to confirm they could all breathe water as easily as air there was still resistance to the idea. Adalai wondered if the abilities they’d gained would wear off, leaving them with no way to breathe underwater. In many cases Cassian would have considered that a fine thing to worry about. However any Neronan familiar with dragon stories knew that it wasn’t possible to undo the changes brought about by eating a dragon so easily.

So they went down the mineshaft with Cassian in the lead. Along the way they discovered a number of new things about their condition. While they could all breathe the water the only one of them that could speak to the others while submerged was Verina which made keeping eveyone together difficult. Doubly so as Cassian was the only one that could actually see.

Clearly they had all had a different reaction to eating the dragon’s corpse. Doubtless Marta’s scales reflected some kind of change in her but whatever it was it wasn’t constant. In the time it took them to climb down into the water the scales on her skin had entirely disappeared. Adalai showed no obvious changes, which didn’t mean much given the circumstances.

Since he was the one who could see Cassian navigated with Adalai and Verina holding onto his shoulders. Marta took the rear, holding Verina’s free hand. That way Verina could tell Cassian if Marta got seperated from her and the extra weight of Cassian and Marta’s metal armor was distributed equally and would hopefully keep them from being swept away by a sudden current.

For the most part it worked. The group kept together and they managed to reach the first horizontal shaft without incident. However once they were there Cassian kept getting distracted by odd glimmers on the wall. He tried to point them out to Verina but he couldn’t explain them to her and she apparently couldn’t see them. That suggested there was more to his own changes than just seeing in the dark. He’d have to look into it more once they were on dry ground again.

In spite of their ability to breathe not everything about travelling under the water was easy. The shafts and tunnels had surprising currents and eddies in them. They were frequently forced to crawl on hands and knees in single file to make it through the narrowest parts of the tunnels. When struggling to ascend or descend a vertical shaft they frequently got seperated and Cassian found his stamina flagging after spending five minutes dragging himself up and down a particularly twisty vertical shaft, trying to pull the group back together after they were seperated working their way around a corner.

Behind it all was a constant, numbing cold. The mines had not seen the sun since long before Old Lum drowned them. The water within them was just as cold as the ocean without. If Verina had not known where a pocket of air was located thanks to the Linnorm’s scouting they might have given in to despair.
As it was it took them the better part of an hour to get down two mineshafts, cross two tunnels, climb up to their destination tunnel and emerge into the air again. At least the air pocket proved breathable. It wasn’t much progress but it was something.

They’d arrived at an intersection of two tunnels and whoever had built the mine had enlarged the area to create a staging ground. A few crates of half rotted supplies, piles of rusting tools and heaps of stones lay scattered about. One passage was collapsed and the other three were flooded. However there must have been a small passage out somewhere in the ceiling because they could feel a cold breeze washing over them the moment they scrambled out of the water.

It wasn’t much but after the night’s march, the frantic battle with the dragon and the grueling swim through pitch black tunnels they were all exhausted. Cassian picked through the debris, piled up the least rotted bits of rope, baskets and crates then doused them in lantern oil and lit it with his flint. After ensuring the smoke was venting through some crack in the ceiling they all flopped down beside the fire to dry out. Cassian wound up drifting to sleep as the warmth worked its way into his bones.

He woke up to the sound of a man dying. A deep, rasping cough echoed through the tunnels and, as he looked around through bleary eyes, Cassian realized it was coming from Adalai. The other man had withdrawn to the collapsed end of the tunnel and was in the process of trying to regurgitate a lung. Cassian dragged himself into a sitting position. Verina had collected a few more crates and was feeling them to the fire one board at a time. Their eyes met and he asked, “What’s wrong with him?”

She tsked. “He’s a man. Do you really think he would tell me? He has to pretend he’s tough even though we can all tell he’s teetering on the brink of Eternity.”

Cassian snorted. “Of course. If he despised you he would tell you all about his scratchy throat so that the feeling would be mutual. At least we know he holds you in high regard.” He spotted Marta lying at the edge of the firelight and gestured to her. “Has she woken up yet?”

“No.” Verina gave the Hexton woman a concerned look. “Her arm looks like it’s healed already but it’s taken a lot out of her.”

“It’s got to be better than making the entire trip here with a broken arm.” He dragged himself to his feet and shook himself out, trying to drive the last vestiges of cold and damp out of his feet and legs. After flapping his limbs around some to warm them he crossed over to where Adalai was hunkered down.

The Arminger didn’t look like he was dying. He wasn’t flushed or sweaty, he just sat staring at the fire with a glossy look in his eyes, a handkerchief over his nose and mouth. He didn’t seem to notice Cassian’s approach until the other man spoke. “Did you catch a chill in the water, Adalai?”

He jerked as if prodded with a dagger and his eyes slid over to study the Ironhand for a long moment. “Cassian?”

“Who else?”

“You wouldn’t believe me.”

Very cryptic but not at all helpful. “Are you sick, Adalai?”

His gaze wandered back to the fire. “No.”

Frustrated by the man’s obtuseness he plopped down next to him and said, “You don’t sound healthy, at any rate. Why are you sitting all the way over here? You’d do better to finish drying yourself out by the fire before we have to go back into the water later on.”

“Can’t.” Carpathia paused to lower his handkerchief and spit a wad of blood and phlegm onto the floor. “The smoke bothers me. I stayed as long as I could but I can’t. Not that close. Not in a place like this.”

Cassian frowned. That explaination did not really explain much. However it wasn’t really his place to pry into the lives and insecurities of the others. They were not really a company of bravos. They were just a handful of souls, joined together for the moment, trying to make it out of a bad situation. How one of them could be reduced to a coughing mess just by sleeping next to a campfire, a very common experience in Nerona, was not the most pressing concern. “Well, try to get some more sleep if you can. There’s not a lot left to burn and not much more left to eat. We’ll need to move on soon.”

Adalai nodded. “Has the Linnorm found a good place for us to head to next?”
“I haven’t asked yet. That is the next thing I need to look in to.”

As it turned out, the spirit had actually found two likely locations to head towards. Continuing in the direction they had been travelling would take them down below the water again but it was a fairly straight path. The Linnorm reported that, at the furthest reaches of its range the tunnel turned upwards again and may eventually return above ground. The surface was apparently only ten to fifteen feet overhead.

On the other hand, if they turned and headed to the left they would find a shaft leading down to a tunnel that exited into the Gulf only a short distance away.

“The Gulf will have more tides and currents than we’ve faced so far,” Adalai said. “It will be a lot easier to get separated out there.”

“But we know it will get us out of the mines,” Marta said. “Even if the other tunnel goes up there’s no telling if it will take us all the way out to the surface. Even five feet of dirt is a lot to dig through safely. We’re three times that deep now and we don’t even have tools.”

Verina nodded. “More than that, we’re here to try and find the caravan and Cassian’s brother. If the dragon took them then it would have stashed them with the rest of its treasures.” She pointed out towards the Gulf. “It’s lair is doubtless out there somewhere. The creature was far to large to fit down here.”

“What if it had its Benthic thralls hide its treasure down here?” Adalai asked.

“Dragons wouldn’t risk losing their treasure just because its servants die,” Cassian said. “It would keep them in a protected place, sure, but one it could get to on its own.”

Marla sighed. “I was hoping we’d be done with the water soon.”

“Aren’t your people great seafarers?” Verina asked.

“The Hextons? Yes. Clan Towers? We prefer the land.”

The journey out to the Gulf wasn’t as time consuming as the previous leg of the trip. Cassian estimated it was half are hour, no more. When they emerged into open water the others were excited to find that even they had enough light to see by. However that was the end of the good news.

Not all the light they found there came from the sun filtering through the waves. A great deal of it came from a ring of sea anemones that grew around the tunnel exit and glowed with a soft blue light from deep within. Each plant was the size of a large dog and they were grouped unnaturally close together. It was impossible to pass through them without brushing against one of their stinging fronds.

But keeping them contained was very much the purpose of the anemones. That and illuminating them for the six armed Benthic that swept down from above, brandishing spears.

The Drownway Chapter Thirteen – The Fate of the Dragon

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Cassian pulled himself upright, head swimming, and looked around. He was sitting in a mound of rubble. Dirt and stones slid off of him in small avalanches. The dust of the cave-in still hung in the air, obscuring the world around him. Something sticky clung to his hands.He looked down to see them covered in dark, blue gray blood. So thick and clinging was the substance that he could not see his own natural skin tone through it. He shoved himself to his feet, his mind already trying to assess the situation and figure out what needed to be done. The first step after any accident in the smithy was to check on everyone in the area.

He’d caused the cave-in deliberately but otherwise the basic idea was sound. So he licked his lips, spat out the grit and said, “Adalai? Verina, Marta can you hear me?”

No answer came and, after waiting for nearly a minute, Cassian started to pace around the cramped area still free of rubble. It was about fifteen feet from cave-in to cave-in. Not a lot of space for three people to disappear in yet there was no sign of them, just a wedge shaped puddle of the same goo he was covered in. He pivoted to look back at the spot he’d woken up. He’d been the closest to the collapse so in theory he should have been the only one under the rubble. Theory didn’t go for a whole lot at the moment.He started digging through the rubble. “Marta?” Moving the rubble proved much easier than he was expecting. “Adalai? Verina?”

He’d just reached out to move a rock the size of his head, the biggest piece he’d come across so far, when the rubble on the far left side of the corridor erupted and Verina got shakily to her feet, pulling Adalai along behind her.

“Finally!” Cassian kept digging but spared one eye to study the two of them. “Is he okay? How did you get stuck under there, I thought you were further back.”

The yaga shook her head to clear it then looked around aimlessly. “Cassian? Is that you?”

“Of course it’s me, who else would it be?” A soft gleam caught his eye a few steps ahead and he moved forward to dig it out.”Where are you ?”

“What are you, blind? I’m right here.” It wasn’t the right moment to lose his temper but he was starting to get close.

“Of course I’m blind, Cassian, if you have the time to complain about it you might try lighting the lantern instead.”

Cassian realized he hadn’t seen the lantern during his brief look around the corridor earlier. “It’s around here somewhere. I can see just fine.”

He uncovered Marta’s shoulder and carefully dragged her out of the rubble, taking care not to jostle her shield arm too much. Once she was free he discovered two surprising things. First, her arm no longer looked broken. Second, her shield seemed to glow with a strange, silvery light. He wondered if she had strained her Gift in some way there at the end and this was some indication of it.

“What are you talking about?” Verina demanded. “I can’t see anything here. The lantern must have gone out when the roof collapsed.”

Cassian turned Marta face up and discovered, to his shock, that her skin had taken on a scaled pattern much like that of the Benthic. He looked around frantically, a cold feeling settling in his stomach.

“Zalt,” he whispered. “We ate the dragon.”

A long moment passed before Verina whispered back. “What?”

“I can see in the dark, the dragon’s corpse isn’t here and I don’t know how we all wound up buried in rubble unless we were eating it and wound up eating our way under the rubble.”

“We ate it?” Verina sounded faint.

“That’s what happens when a dragon dies. Haven’t you heard any of the stories? It’s hunger has to go somewhere and when people kill the dragon it’s almost always moves into the killers. Then they eat it.”

Verina made a soft gagging sound. For a moment Cassian was worried she was trying to force herself to vomit up what she’d eaten, which clearly wasn’t going to work. Even if they hadn’t eaten the dragon’s whole body, just the head and neck that had been in reach on this side of the collapsed tunnel, it was still a volume of meat greater than the largest cow he’d ever laid eyes on. To say nothing of the creature’s bones. Yet their stomachs showed no signs of gorging on such a huge quantity of food. It seemed the dragon’s hunger did more than drive them to eat. It also helped them absorb what they took in. Hopefully the supernatural powers of consumption and digestion wouldn’t last forever, or the provisions they’d brought along were not going to last.

Verina was still distraught. Her eyes were tracking something not even Cassian’s dragon enhanced vision could see and her lips moved without producing sound. He hoped she was just speaking to the Great Linnorm. He decided to give her a moment.

Taking a rope he tied a rag to one end, lowered it into the flooded mineshaft and let it absorb some water. Then he took the rag and used it to sponge some of the dirt off of Marta and Adalai’s faces. As he’d hoped that got them coming back to wakefulness. He also located the lantern and took possession of it, quickly draining the oil into a flask and tucking them both away into his bag.

As he finished Adalai sat up, rubbing his head, saying, “What happened? Did we get the dragon?”

“That’s one way to put it.” Cassian gently helped Marta up and brought her over to sit with the rest of them.

“It’s dark,” she muttered. “Let me find the lantern.”

“No lantern,” Cassian said. “We’re currently trapped in a very small space with no connection to the outside air. What air we do have is going to turn bad soon and lighting a lantern won’t help. The way I see it we have three ways to get out of here and we need to decide which one we are going to try very quickly.”

“Three ways?” Adalai sounded surprised at that assessment. “We can try and dig our way out the way we came or we can try to dig past the old cave-in. What’s the third way?”

“We can swim,” Verina said. Clearly finished with whatever communing she had been doing, the yaga’s attention was now on the matter at hand. “The Linnorm has gone to see if the flooded shaft connects aboveground anywhere. Or at least leads back to a shaft above the waterline.”

“There’s no way of knowing whether we can breath the air on the other side of the sunken mines, if there is any,” Adalai pointed out.

“That’s true of digging out the old cave-in as well,” Marta replied.

“And the fresh cave-in is the most likely to collapse if we disturb it,” Cassian concluded. “None of these are particularly good options. Honestly, I’d like it if we didn’t have to do any of these things but if we stay still then we are doomed and I’m not prepared to face Eternity just yet. So we have to choose one.”

“One?” Adalai cocked his head in contemplation. “Why not two? That way we don’t lose time if one of them doesn’t work.”

“We don’t have enough room to dig both ways at once,” Verina pointed out. “We’d just wind up with a new wall of rubble between us and that would make things difficult if we find a way out and need to join up again.”

“We could throw anything we move down the flooded mineshaft,” Marta suggested.

“Sure,” Adalai said, “but I was thinking one of us could swim the flooded shaft and the rest could dig towards the entrance.”

“Let’s hold off on swimming until we know what the Linnorm finds,” Cassian said. “How far from you can he go, Verina?”

“It depends on a number of things but right now, about a hundred and fifty feet. He should return soon.”

So they took a few minutes to dig towards the entrance, struggling against waves of loose dirt and stone that trickled from the ceiling. Cassian had just called a halt after a secondary collapse brought tons of falling debris down on them, undoing almost all the progress they’d made when Verina reported the Linnorm was back.The spirit reported that it hadn’t seen any new exit from the mines via the submerged tunnels. It did discover a large network of tunnels leading in all directions. There were even a few places where the Linnorm said there was no water although Marta was quick to point out again that that didn’t mean breathable air. Cassian still felt it was worth taking the time to explore. It did lead to another question, though.

“I should go,” Verina insisted. “If I move around then the Linnorm will be able to scout further. It will also be easier to pull me up out of the mineshaft if I don’t find anything. I weigh much less than you.”

“I can see,” Cassian said. “That’s going to be much more important to getting around safely down there than anything else.”

“You can see?” Adalai asked. “Since when?”

“Since eating the dragon.” He’d explained what he thought happened to the others while they were digging but hadn’t gotten around to mentioning the changes he saw as a result.

“Eating a dragon makes you see in the dark?” Adalai shook his head in bewilderment. “That’s amazing. I know they’re incredibly dangerous and all but why don’t I hear about people hunting down and eating these things on a regular basis?”

“Because the power held in dragon flesh is intended to pass down to their hatchlings,” Verina said. “When it winds up in the hands of others the dragons that should have inherited it chase them down, kill them and devour them to get it back.”

“That’s pretty bad,” Adalai agreed.

‘”Worse, no one wants the people who have eaten dragons around,” Cassian said as he passed a rope around his waist. “Too much collateral damage results.”

“That’s understandable.” Adalai braced himself and started lowering Cassian down into the mineshaft.To his surprise, once he reached the water he found it to be surprisingly warm. Given that the waters of the Gulf tended towards the chilly side of things at that time of the year Cassian found that rather surprising. It was not the only surprise in store for him.He also found that his enhanced eyesight could easily see through the surface of the water and down to the bottom of the mineshaft, which he estimated was at least a hundred feet below. He spotted at least three side tunnels branching off in various directions. “Okay, Adalai, there’s a rock here I’m going to tie the rope to so it doesn’t get lost. Go ahead and anchor your end somewhere. I’ll call for you if I need pulled back up.”

“Got it. We’ll keep digging, then. If we find a way out then I’ll light the lantern. Stay here if you see it and I’ll check in every so often until you come back.”

It was as good a plan as anything. Once he had everything in place Cassian dove under the water, intending to dive down to the first tunnel and look down it before surfacing for air. However he hadn’t descended more than half the distance to the tunnel in question before he subconsciously took a breath, sucking water into his lungs. Then he scrambled upwards through the water, using his Gift to add bouyancy to his armor. Once he broke the surface he called out, “Adalai, Adalai! I can breathe the water!”

The Drownway Chapter Twelve – The Mines

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Whatever the half buried building had been before the sea took the Drownway, Adalai presumed it wasn’t intended as a living space. Although the doors that had once occupied the entrance were now long rotted away the sheer size of the opening they left behind suggested it was some kind of public building with grandiose double doors. There were no windows at ground level. The handful that were visible in the poor light were all located overhead, near the point where the walls met the roof.

Other than a hole the size of a barrel in the front wall, about ten feet from the doorway, said doorway was the only way to see the world outside. Much of the building’s interior was just as obscured. A little light came in through the doorway and a touch more peeked through holes in the tiled roof. At least the contrast in the lighting was in their favor. The rain was beginning to let up and, although it was hardly bright, the skies outside were still lighter than things inside. So Adalai posted himself by the break in the wall and peered out, watching for the Benthic to make themselves known again.

While he waited he found himself absently rummaging through his bag. His fingers had just closed on a packet of jerky when a clatter of stones inside the building caught his attention. He blinked twice as he turned his attention inward. His eyes rapidly adjusted to the change in lighting and he discovered that Cassian was digging through a pile of dirty reddish rocks as Marta held a lantern aloft to illuminate his work. As far as Adalai could tell there was nothing particularly important about the rocks. He glanced at Verina but she was watching the doorway.

“Cassian,” he hissed. “What are you doing?”

“Do you know where this is?” Cassian threw down the stones he’d been rummaging through, got to his feet and dashed towards the back of the cavernous structure.

A moment of panic washed over him. Up until this point the Ironhand had been a remarkably clear headed decision maker. Now it looked almost like a madness had taken hold at him. Adalai was not the only one who had noticed there was something off with the other man. Marta followed closely behind him, a lantern she’d just lit in one hand.

“Cassian?” She caught up to him before had gone more than fifteen feet and stopped him with a hand on the shoulder. “Where are you going?”

Instead of answering he took the arm holding the lantern and pushed it upwards to illuminate more of the ceiling. Adalai sucked in a deep breath as it revealed a set of heavy timbers bracing up not a stone tiled roof but a dirt tunnel at the back of the building.

Cassian put a finger to his lips and they stoool in silence for a long moment. As his heartbeat quieted Adalai caught the soft sloshing sound of waves drifting out of the passage behind them. “This is an old iron mine,” Cassian whispered. “The tunnels go deep enough that they must have flooded when the ocean overtook it.”

“We’re outflanked,” Marta replied in the same tone. “Even if the dragon can’t fit through whatever passages lead in here his pet Benthic can.”

Adalai glanced back out through the hole in the wall. “They haven’t come this way yet.”

“What was that?” Cassian sounded bewilderd. “Chew your food. Is this really the time to stop for a snack?”

Adalai started, suddenly aware that he had a hunk of jerky in his hands and more of it between his teeth. He chewed twice more and swallowed. “What…”

“It’s the dragon’s presence,” Verina said, never taking her eyes off the doorway. “They are hunger incarnate and the power of their need manifests in mortal creatures near them in the form of insatiable gluttony. There may be a way here underwater but the dragon is coming by land. The Linnorm is watching it.”

With an effort of will Adalai shoved the jerky back into his bag saying, “Does that mean you can manifest him again?”

“No. But he’s still here and able to see the world even if he cannot influence our part of it.”

“Well tell him to watch the mine shaft then,” Cassian said. “Just because the dragon isn’t coming that way doesn’t mean its minions aren’t. The last thing we need is getting caught in a pincer.”

Adalai cast a quick glance out the doorway, made sure there were no signs of the creatures approaching, then knelt down by the Slavic woman. “Are you well? I’ve never seen an Invoker who reacts like you when a spirit they’ve Invoked is injured.”

“Few bind a spirit to themselves as the yagas do, and for exactly that reason,” she explained, a hand absently rubbing her shoulder at the place her tattoo ran over it. “I’ll recover, assuming we survive the night. Even with the Linnorm weakened he does much for me. I am sure I don’t feel the influence of the hunger to the same extent you do, for example.”

“Adalai,” Cassian hissed, “they’re here.”

Moving quickly, Adalai joined him at the entrance, taking position on the opposite side of the empty doorway. If the sea dragon had sent any of its servants around to the sunken mineshaft it wasn’t evident. There were at least twenty Benthic massing at the bottom of the hill, although it was still impossible to get a full count of the number in the faint light. More concerning than the numbers was the massive globe of water two of the Benthic levitated above them.

“Do we have away to avoid getting washed away by that?” Adalai asked.

Cassian glanced at Marta, who had left the lantern at the back of the building behind one of the rock pile and moved over to the hole in the wall. “What’s our Shieldbearer’s opinion?”

“Not possible for me. I’ve never been good at creating barriers that last for a long period of time, maybe fifteen seconds, though I can make one big enough to cover the building if that helps.”

“Not particularly,” Cassian said. “Switch places with me. Use the shield to keep they from swarming the door so Adalai can fight them one on one or two at a time. I’ll do my best to pick one or two off from over there.”

It was a good plan. Adalai had worked with other bravo captains in the past and he found the speed and decisiveness Cassian displayed to be better than the average. He made good use of people’s abilities as well. However the legends say that the dragon is a creature more cunning than any man. The sea dragon that had pursued them put the proof to those tales.

As the Benthic grouped together and came charging forward in their bizarre crawling run there was a deafening crash and the building’s roof shook in under the weight of the dragon’s coils suddenly slamming into its tiles. One of the holes overhead caved in further as the dragon’s head shoved the tiles out of the way.

For a breathless moment Adalai watched the debris fall in slow motion, his mind scrambling to come up with some idea of what he should be doing. Stone tiles were raining down towards Verina. The sea dragon’s neck bulged with water as it prepared an attack. The Benthic continued towards them, heedless of the danger from man or beast.

A flash of terror lit Verina’s face for an instant before a brighter light subsumed it in verdant luminescence. The heat haze silhouette of the Linnorm filled the room for a brief second. One head swatted the debris from the air while the other butted the sea dragon on the chin, spoiling the serpent’s aim. Then the green light was gone again, and the Great Linnorm with it.

In that moment Adalai clearly saw what had to happen. He grabbed Marta and spun her around, pushing her shield up at an angle with his free hand while frantically gesturing from the dragon to the doorway with the point of his sword. There wasn’t time for anything more but thankfully Marta understood what he was getting at.

The dragon had already begun spewing water but, with its head out of position, the torrent flew uselessly towards the corner of the room. As the serpent swung its head back towards them the dome of Marta’s shield appeared, sending most of the water cascading off and out the doorway towards the encroaching Benthic. Cassian threw his remaining daggers at them – in the conventional fashion, not with his Gift – and dashed towards Verina. She had collapsed again and this time she wasn’t even twitching.

The sea dragon ran out of water but this time it wasn’t done. Instead of closing its mouth it lunged forward and did its best to sink its fangs into Marta’s shield dome. Adalai expected its teeth to just slide off the dome but he’d underestimated the abilities of a dragon. A sickly gray shadow spread through the dome’s bright white light from the points where the teeth touched it. Marta cried out and the dome vanished.

The after image of the dome was still fading when the dragon struck again, diving towards Marta, its teeth snapping. She managed to get her physical shield between them as she tried to dodge but the dragon’s horse sized head still struck a glancing blow. Adalai braced her and she kept her feet but he heard a sickening popping sound in the process. There wasn’t time to worry about that.

By reaching down into the building the dragon had left itself exposed. Long, pulsing gills flapped open and closed along its neck. Adalai put the tip of his sword against the dragon’s flank and pushed it forward, scraping along the creature’s gleaming pearlescent scales until it caught in the gills. As soon as the blade was in place he put both hands on the hilt and shoved as hard as he could. The sword plunged in up to the hilt.

Adalai left it there. He sprinted towards the back of the building, Marta already a half step in front of him. Cassian was shaking Verina but she remained unresponsive. Adalai came in and scooped her into a shoulder carry. Once she was off his hands Cassian pulled out his vial of quicksilver and broke it open. As the dragon thrashed around in agony, tearing the roof apart and threatening to topple the whole building, Cassian twitched a finger twice and pulled the quicksilver out of its container and shot it at the serpent in a trio of deadly droplets that splattered across the creature’s gills with an odd hissing sound. Or maybe that was also the dragon expressing its agony.

“To the mineshafts,” Cassian declared.

They hurried deeper into the building as quickly as they could. As they passed the lantern Marta had set down she slung her mace and took it up again, illuminating their path down into the depths. They had not gone very deep into the mines before. Now they discovered that there was not much deeper to go. They barely ran ten seconds before they came to a deep hole at the end of the tunnel.

There might have been more tunnel beyond the downward shaft but rubble and rotted timber filled it, blocking the way. The downward shaft ended in a dark sheet of water some fifteen feet below. As they stared at it Adalai felt his stomach rumble.

Cassian looked around, considering the tunnel, looking for something, though Adalai couldn’t guess what. Adalai adjusted Verina slightly and tried to unbuckle one of the extra swords he’d strapped to his pack. As he worked he said, “Quicksilver is a poison, yes?”

“If you breath it, yes,” Cassian said. “It can kill a man after a few hours or days, though dragons can supposedly eat anything so I doubt they’d be poisoned easily, especially by a kind of silver.”

Nerona hadn’t discovered the table of elements and Adalai didn’t think it was the time to try and explain it to a blacksmith. “Then I suppose we just have to stab it.”

Cassian looked back at Marta. “How’s your arm? Can you make a shield to block the tunnel for a few seconds?”

She looked down at her shield arm, which hung at an unnatural angle. She set the lantern down and put her free hand on the shield’s edge. “A few.”

“Help me with this, Adalai.” Cassian gestured to a fallen timber and together they dragged it over to a wall and braced it there. Cassian climbed up the timber, stripped off his gloves, placed his two hands on the timber holding up the ceiling and closed his eyes.

Adalai’s stomach growled fiercely, the noise almost enough to drown out the sound of scales scraping over stone. The eel head of the sea dragon pushed into the small circle of light cast by the lantern. Marta held up her shield, lifting it as much by the rim as by the arm it was strapped to. The dragon’s lips spat a small globe of water at her and knocked her flat. A second and third attack were fired at Adalai, though he avoided them by ducking behind some of the rubble from the cave in.

The dragon turned it’s attention to Cassian. With a yell he pulled his hands away from the timber and scrambled away from the dragon. It lunged after him, hissing. The Ironhand took three steps, turned back and throw the nails in his hands at the dragon. The timber overhead he’d taken them from groaned then collapsed.

For a brief moment Adalai saw fear in the dragon’s eyes. Then it vanished under the crushing weight of stone.

The Drownway Chapter Eleven – The Sea Dragon

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The sea dragon and the Great Linnorm locked eyes and roared, their combined voices shaking the air and, for just a moment, overwhelming the the sound of the storm. The horde of Benthic clambered out of the surf and charged towards them across the beach. Cassian studied the forces arrayed against them and shouted, “Fall back! Don’t let them surround us!”

“Where are we going?” Marta yelled back, straining to be heard over the cacophony.

“Inland,” Cassian replied, dashing around the side of the dunes toward the center of the island. “Hopefully that dragon can’t follow us.”

“Don’t bet on it,” Verina said, struggling to keep pace with him. “Just because the dragon swims doesn’t mean it can’t fly.”

Behind them the sea dragon’s body tensed and rippled, swelling with terrible potential until it unleashed a massive torrent of rushing water on the Linnorm. The two headed spirit exhaled twin streams of pale green fire in response. The three blasts collided with an ear splitting shriek and an explosion of steam that hid the ocean from view. Steam did little to stop the sheer mass of the sea dragon’s attack. The rush of water swept past the twin dragon’s fire and slammed into the spirit’s flank, creating a second burst of steam and sending it rolling across the beach for a split second before the Linnorm vanished and Verina pitched face first into the sand.

“Zalt,” Cassian hissed, sliding to a stop then scrambling back to drag the yaga upright. Her eyes rolled in her skull like dice in a gambler’s cup and all her limbs hung limp so the Ironhand wrapped her arm around his neck, grabbed her waist then started to drag. Two or three steps later Marta caught up and took Verina’s other side.

Yet even with two of them to manage the Slav’s dead weight they were losing ground. The Benthic weren’t made for moving quickly over land but even they were able to close the gap and by the time Cassian and the others rounded the nearest dune the sea dwellers had closed to within two hundred feet. Adalai had waited for them to catch up and kept pace next to Marta as they withdrew. “What happened?”

“Linnorm. Overwhelmed.” Verina was starting to come around, though her feet still dragged limply behind her.

“I didn’t think Invokers worked that way.” Adalai clicked his tongue and pivoted to walk backwards while he watched the Benthic’s steady approach. “This must be another side effect of the yaga being bound to their spirit.”

“Just need a few seconds,” Verina panted. “Then I can walk. The Great One needs longer before he can show himself again.”

“Fantastic,” Cassian said. “The Linnorm was the only thing we had in a sea dragon’s weight class.”

There was a soft thud and a long, thin spear sprouted from the sand to their left. “They’ve got javelins,” Adalai reported. “Marta, switch out with me, we’re going to need your shield in pretty short order.”

“No, I can stand,” Verina said. She visibly gathered herself and got her feet under her. She swayed for a moment as the other two withdrew their support but remained upright.

Marta immediately turned around and began walking backwards as well. Adalai rummaged in his bag for a moment then held out the daggers he’d taken from the bandits the day before. “You’re our best long range worker, Cassian. You’ll need all the ammunition you can get.”

Cassian took the three knives and stuck them into his belt then tugged his left glove off and tucked it in there as well. With his other hand he directed his own sword forward to slash at the approaching Benthic. The weapon darted in and out of the approaching crowd, menacing them enough that their advance was slowed and occasionally scattering dark red blood on the sand. The Benthic weren’t wearing anything like armor but their scales were tough and they were quick to block most attacks with their sharp coral or bone spears. But every now and then he got lucky.

Adalai shot him a sideways look as they rounded another dune and put it between themselves and the Benthic. “You plan to Ironhand those things any time soon?”

“It’s not that simple,” Cassian said, taking one of the daggers in his left hand. “I don’t know this metal yet. I made the weapons and armor I brought with me so I already had a grasp of it but these things are new to me. It’s going to take a minute or two.”

“What happened to the knives you brought with you?” Verina asked.

“I didn’t get a chance to call them back before the sea dragon showed up,” Cassian said, splitting his attention between learning the dagger in his hand, controlling the sword harrying the Benthic and carrying the conversation. “They’re well out of my reach now.”

As if to drive that point home the sea dragon threw it’s coiling bulk up onto the side of the dune, sending an avalanch of sand rushing down towards them as the dragon’s belly churned the grains about, seeking purchase. They had yet to see more than it’s head and a half dozen feet of its body at any one time but, from the way its entire mass seemed to flex and sway with its movement, Cassian guessed it was one of those dragons that had no legs, just a worm like body. The pearl in its forehead flickered with a sinister internal light. In response the Benthic abandoned all efforts at defending themselves from Cassian’s darting sword, dropped to the sand and scrambled forward on all fours.

Or rather, all threes. Their new posture made it apparent that one reason they hadn’t overtaken Cassian and his party was how truly ill suited they were to moving about on land. Their bodies seemed to end in a long, tapering, eel-like appendage twice or perhaps three times as long as the legs of a comparably sized man. The tail alone clearly didn’t allow them to move very fast. However, with the added propulsion of their upper bodies they began to close the distance at an alarming rate.

Cassian felt a pang of regret. From the clear self destructive behavior and the glow from the pearls in their foreheads it was obvious the Benthic were not acting of their own accord. However he didn’t see much he could do about that. So he did his best to set them free painlessly, driving his sword’s point down through their backs quickly and ruthlessly as soon as they came within the distance his Gift could operate in. Very quickly the bodies of three, then four of the pitiable creatures lay twitching and dying on the sand, their arms and tails no longer possessing the strength to move them.

It wasn’t enough. The sea dragon seemed to have two or three dozen Benthic in its thrall and they were all pouring over the dunes towards the human quartet. They clawed their way across the sand with a manic intensity. When Cassian’s sword flew through the air over their heads they snatched at it with their bare hands, heedless of the danger. One lost a finger and others suffered deep cuts. Yet it was clear to Cassian that they were going to get ahold of it sooner or later and he didn’t want to lose the only weapon left he could use well with his Gift.

So he called the sword back to his hand. He weighed the new dagger in his off hand, feeling it’s strong buzz in the back of his head, and estimated how much control he could exert over it. Certainly not enough for anything delicate. He’d just have to settle for throwing the weapon and calling it back to his hand.

By the time they were off the dunes and climbing inland Cassian had managed to kill another Benthic and injured two more. As he started scrambling over scrub grass the Benthic were nearly in range to strike with the short spears they carried. Cassian was drawing back his arm for another throw when Manta yelled, “Hold!”

At first he wasn’t sure what she had in mind, since the Benthic had stopped throwing things at them when they got down to one spear apiece. The Hexton maid had continued to pace him in spite of that. Now she stepped forward, her shield glowing brighter than he had ever seen it, and thrust it forward until it almost touched the closest Benthic. A barrier in the shape of a half dome appeared, bright as the sun in the storming dark, and swept forward, throwing the creatures back in disarray.

Up until that point the sea dragon had watched its servants’ struggles with dispassion, doing little more than slither from dune to dune to keep them in sight. When Marta’s barrier swept over the Benthic it raised up again, the pearl in its head pulsing faster. As the barrier faded the dragon’s jaw gaped open and its throat swelled like a frog’s before spewing another enormous stream of water that smashed the remains of Manta’s glowing shield and cast her back several steps.

Cassian dropped his weapons and caught her, bracing himself against the torrent of water and doing his best to keep her from being swept away. The surge did catch his sword and dagger and he only had the focus and control to snag his sword out of the wave before it was swept away. Then the real danger of the dragon’s plan showed itself. They were going uphill and water naturally wanted to move downhill so, as the force the dragon had put behind it died away the wave turned around and swept past them again, this time full of rocks and driftwood that battered them as they swept past. A large piece of flotsam caught Cassian in the side and he would have been swept away if Adalai hadn’t grabbed his belt.

A loud croaking sound rose up over the din of combat and surussus of rain. Panicked, Cassian looked around for the source only to realize it was coming from the sea dragon. The creature had risen up like a snake about to strike and was booming out the wet, belching sound like a general barking out orders. Except the dragon ordered its thralls with the pearls in their foreheads. It didn’t need to make noise to communicate with them. It was just laughing.

The dragon was watching them struggle for its own amusement.

Two of its Benthic servants were gathering the receding wave up using their watery arts, massing it into one place. Whether their plan was to attack with it themselves or just return it to the dragon Cassian couldn’t begin to guess but whichever it was it spelled disaster for them. “Run,” he gasped, suiting actions to words. “Just get as far inland as you can, we’ll try to find some place their powers are less effective.”

In truth he suspected they’d gone as far as there was to go. Dragons often attacked caravans for the treasures they carried and, if this one had enslaved some Benthic to help it scout for desperate souls using the Drownway, that would explain what had happened to Cazador and his group. They’d been taken by the dragon to feed its appetite for treasure and food.

“There’s an old building on the south side of the summit,” Adalai panted as they sprinted uphill, pulling the still groggy Verina along as she began to lag. “I spotted it on our way here. It’s fairly large and sturdy looking. It might not stand up to multiple hits from the dragon but it will slow down the Benthic.”

“Lead the way.”

It was a harrowing three minutes getting up to the island’s summit and around to the building Adalai had described. There was a slight reprieve. Cassian suspected that, just like he could only use his Gift on metal within a certain distance, the dragon could only control the Benthic if they stayed close to it. He wasn’t sure why the serpent didn’t follow them immediately. Perhaps it was summoning more Benthic from the deep. Perhaps it was refilling some internal reservoir of water by returning to the ocean or drinking the liquid the Benthic had gathered. Perhaps it just liked watching them run.

Regardless, the dragon and its servants didn’t molest them along the way. It was almost more nervewracking to make the trip in safety than it was to be harried the entire way. Still, they arrived safely at the rundown ruins of a huge, simplistic rectangular building half buried in sand and scrub brush. Without hesitation they darted into the cavernous entrance to prepare for the next assault. It was only as Adalai sat Verina on a low sand pile and Marta fumbled to light a lantern that Cassian realized how bad an idea coming there really was.

The Drownway Chapter Five – The Dangers of the Path

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The massive, two headed form of the Great Linnorm heaved itself out of the sea and straddled the Drownway, water running down its sides in sheets. Within the pale, shimmering green spirit was a slim, feminine form. Cassian groaned. Clearly Verina Highplains hadn’t taken no for an answer.

“Calm down,” he said to the others, “I don’t think that one’s out to get us. Well, maybe me after what I said yesterday but she’ll probably give you two a pass.”

“She?” Adalai’s question had a decidedly pointed tone.

“Yes, she.” Cassian gently pulled Marta back, motioning for Adalai to lower his weapons with his other hand.

The Great Linnorm surged forward, a pair of leathery bat-like wings unfurling from its back, and it lept over the waves to land in front of Cassian with a titanic splash. Unlike Verina, who was protected by the body of the spirit she had Invoked, Cassian wound up drenched by the spray. Almost as soon as it appeared the body of the Linnorm vanished and left Verina on the shore, a massive serpentine gap in the water behind her slamming closed with a crash of rushing water.

“Signorina Verina,” Cassian said with a polite bow. “It’s a pleasure to see you again so soon.”

“Is it?” She directed a skeptical look in Marta’s direction. “Perhaps it is. Your opinion on things has changed a great deal over the past night.”

“Others have made a compelling case for a different approach,” Cassian replied. “I admit I am a little surprised to see you here today, although given the way things have been going so far perhaps I should have been expecting it.”

Verina’s mood markedly changed when her gaze stopped on Adalai. She stood motionless and a little wide eyed for a moment when their eyes met then she took hold of her skirts, curtsied, and said, “Greetings, stranger. My name is Verina Highplains, a daughter of the People of the Steppes, a yaga of the Lost Slavs.”

It was evident from his expression that Adalai didn’t understand what she had said. Whether that was because Verina’s accent combined with Adalai’s poor grasp of Neronan kept him from comprehension or the man just didn’t know what the terms meant Cassian couldn’t tell.

At least he wasn’t rude about it. He bowed saying, “My name is Adalai Carpathea, a bravo from far away.”

“Far away?” She leaned forward to peer at him, her expression unreadable. “How far? I do not recognize the sound of your speech.”

“I’d rather not say.” Adalai turned and gestured to Marta. “The Lady Towers is of Hexton lands and serves at the pleasure of their king.”

Verina inclined her head towards the other woman but didn’t acknowledge her otherwise. Instead she looked over to Cassian and said, “What made the difference? Has your luck taken a turn?”

“That’s one way to look at it,” he grumbled. “Perhaps I never had any to begin with. Before you ask, yes, if the Linnorm still insists on partaking in this disaster in the making I suppose you can come along. Provided your brother has given his permission. The last thing I need to happen is for the whole of the Highplains cavalry to follow us out onto the Drownway. Especially when they’re under levy.”

A blinding smile transformed Verina’s face, changing her dour Slavic features into a beacon of delight. “Many thanks, Signore Cassian. My brother and I are once again in your debt.”

“You and your Linnorm, too. I just want you to understand that you’re to be very careful how you Invoke that thing.” Cassian gestured out at the land bridge gradually poking its way out of the waves. “That’s not the place to carelessly flail about with a spirit of that size, understand?”

“It’s the privilege of the Linnorm to act as it needs and the duty of the yaga to assist it as we can.”

“If it can’t see a way to act that doesn’t throw us into the ocean then it stays here, understand?” Cassian didn’t wait for an answer. The tide was moving out and, barring the Linnorm flailing about, the waves were pretty calm. It was best to get a head start. As he’d said to Marta, they only had a few hours of low tide to travel in.

Cassian picked his way across a rocky outcrop towards the submerged portion of the Drownway, the slick stone sending the soles of his boots slipping and squeaking as if the ground itself was conspiring against him. “Did you bring provisions suited to the situation?”

“Certainly,” Verina assured him. “The Highplains are no strangers to long campaigns. I have brought jerky and hardtack sufficient for two weeks along with a mercurial glass to judge the weather, though I see that you have one of your own.”

Cassian nodded his grudging approval. “It never hurts to have a spare of any tool made of glass.”

“Then she will be coming with us?” Marta asked.

“She will,” Cassian confirmed.

“Can the spirit just carry us over the water?” Adalai was studying Verina with a keen eye and she returned his scrutiny with equal intensity.

“I’m afraid not.” She held up one hand to display the faintly glowing tattoo there. “Without the marks of a yaga a person cannot safely touch the body of the Great Linnorm, or any other ancestral spirit of the Slavic lands.”

Marta eyed the woman suspiciously. “For the best, I think. Two of us are seeking to discover the fates of family or friends who have traveled this path. If we were wrapped in the coils of such a large spirit we might overlook signs they have left behind.”

“That reminds me,” Cassian said, crouching down by the water, “do you have any idea where the Baron you are looking for went missing?”

“None, sir.”

“How about you?” Adalai asked. “You had that wheel axel, do you know where that came from?”

“A courier crossing in the other direction discovered it and marked the location with a flag.” Cassian sent his tin mirror out over the waves again as he spoke. “He planted it only a few days ago so there is a good chance the flag is still in place now.”

“Then we should make all haste,” Marta replied, poking at barely submerged stone with the toe of her boot.

“Wait,” Cassian said, grabbing her wrist and pulling her back. “There’s sharks in the water out there, see the fins?”

She squinted and stared out at the waves. “Surely the water is too shallow for them to reach us.”

“The animals know the patterns of nature far better than we do,” Verina said. “If they are lurking around here then there is a chance that they could eat. Respect that.”

Marta sighed and stepped back until she was again standing on solid ground. “If you insist.”

“Water in your boots is just as bad,” Adalai said. “Don’t underestimate how nasty a case of trench foot can be if you never get your feet dry again.”

“You think of such lovely things,” Marta said dryly.

“I do try, especially at moments like this.”

In a mere five minutes the water receded enough that they were able to start hopping across the dryish portions of the path, keeping their balance as best they could. In truth Cassian understood Marta’s sense of urgency. Every moment they lost was another chance for Cazador to lose his life. However every craftsman knew the fastest way to work was slow enough to avoid mishaps and, from the stories he’d heard from customers, it was much the same for bravos. So he did his best to keep the group’s progress as steady and deliberate as possible.

Unfortunately things did not go as smoothly as he might wish. It was little things at first. Verina hadn’t seen a map of the Drownway, nor did she know the route, so the small island she’d waited on wasn’t on the path. That wouldn’t have caused a delay except she’d left her pack and provisions there and they’d been forced to go out of their way to retrieve it. Only a five minute delay but Cassian bristled at it none the less.

Then, as the tides began to roll back in, Cassian called a halt at the beginning of a high, narrow ridge that crossed the gap between two larger land masses. At one point a previous expedition had strung a rope as a handhold between two posts driven into the rocks but, from the frayed end of the bits that remained, Cassian concluded that something had caused it to break. The ridge was narrow and uneven. That wouldn’t have been a problem if there hadn’t also been a strong westerly wind blowing.

By all accounts danger was part of the bravo’s calling. Foolhardiness was not. So they hunkered down on the side of the ridge for nearly half an hour until the wind died down. Then Cassian carefully picked his way across the expanse, using his Gift to grab ahold of his armor and push himself more firmly towards the ground. He made the trip with a coil of rope around his waist. Once it was firmly tied to the post on the far side the rest of the group made the trip with no issue.

Unfortunately the prolonged pause left them far enough behind schedule that the tides had turned. They had just enough time to scramble through a final low point in the path before the waves closed over it. The small island that left them on was the first of its kind they’d seen.

Marta stared around at the old, crumbling buildings that dotted the low hill and said, “I thought this place was cut off from the mainland most of the day. How did someone get all this stone out here? Did they carry it over that ridge?”

“There’s other routes through the Drownway,” Cassian replied. “They’re used by caravans like the one we’re looking for but the path is a good five miles longer. This is the fastest route through the Drownway and the one your Baron probably took if he was trying to move quickly. It merges with the caravan route later on. Since I have an idea of where Cazador’s group went missing I plan to head there first and spiral out from that location rather than retrace the caravan route and lose a day to the tides.”

“That doesn’t explain how they got the stone out here,” Verina said.

“They got it from right here.” Cassian gestured to the Gulf. “There was a time before Lum drowned half of Nerona, when these lands were joyful and prosperous rather than hidden by waves. This was probably a fishing village once. There is wreckage from Nerona’s lost cities washed up along the path as well. These buildings are still on their foundations so I presume this is where they were built.”

Adalai had climbed up the remains of a nearby wall, which had crumbled into a stair step shape. Now he suddenly jumped down. “There’s smoke rising from the far side of the island.”

Cassian frowned. “Well, it’s not a bad place to hunker down til low tide. The ruins give some shelter after all.”

“How common is it for people to travel this way?” Marta asked.

“Not that rare,” Cassian said. “But hardly commonplace either.”

“Should we go have a look?” Adalai asked.

“Let’s.”

The island wasn’t very large. If they’d been moving at a full march, aiming to make another crossing before the tides came back in, they could have made it across in eight to ten minutes. Cassian chose to move much slower, using his reflective tin to help them carefully scout the way, checking behind each wall and inside each ruin they passed. As a consequence it took then almost half an hour to get from one side of the island to the other.

Once there Cassian carefully slid his tin around a wall to get a glimpse of the source of the smoke. Tin didn’t make for the best mirror in the world but it showed enough that Cassian could make out three men crouched around a campfire with crankbows leaned against nearby rocks. That, in and of itself, was not unusual. Only fools would travel Nerona’s wilds unarmed.

However one of the men suddenly sat up, quietly motioned to his companions and pointed towards the piece of tin. He must have seen the sun reflecting off of it. Whatever clued him in, his reaction didn’t bode well. He and his friends immediately reached for their weapons, worked the levers and slipped bolts into place.

“Bandits,” Cassian hissed. “Make ready for battle.”

Indie Fiction Round-Up For Winter 2023

I’ve been involved in critiquing and reviewing a number of independently published novels in the past year and I thought I’d bring you my thoughts on three of the best I’ve read so far.

Jiseidai – by Daniel P. Riley

This is a series with two installments so far, focusing on rogue assassin Gabriel on the run from the dystopian megacorp that raised him, trained him and gave him superpowers. Gabriel stumbles upon Hana, a young, abused girl and agrees to save her. He winds up fleeing into the ruins of old Tokyo with Hana, doing his best to avoid pursuit and come to grips with what his role in life is going to be now that he’s left everything he’s known.

There’s plenty of dystopian cyberpunk stories out there and plenty of stories about hardened killers turning over a new leaf. The general direction of these two genres is contradictory so Riley has a hard row to hew here. However so far he’s done a pretty good job of balancing the fun, scifi concepts of near future scientific progress run amok with a much more straight forward narrative of grace and redemption. While I do feel that classifying Jiseidai as true cyberpunk is a bit of a misnomer otherwise it hits what it aims at.

In particular the description of Gabriel’s fighting techniques is quite good. I don’t know if Riley studied budo or kenjutsu in a dojo but he clearly has a decent grasp on the basic concepts and manages to make them halfway believable in the technologically enhanced world Gabriel and Hana live in. Another common concept in Eastern development that runs through Jiseidai is cultivation. In most martial arts stories cultivating refers to the process of isolating and enhancing your internal energies, a foundational concept to the mystic elements of those tales. In Jiseidai what we get instead is a cultivation of relationships. Human connections, human empathy and human morality are central to the growth of our protagonists and seeing them spending as much time refining those instincts and potential is very gratifying. Far more so than the sterile, medicinal processes of cultivation in more run of the mill wuxia fair, although there is a cybernetic flavor of that too.

The Curse of the Star Wraiths – by The Lord Otter

This is a tale of two brothers who must set right the wrongs they have endured. The Curse of the Star Wraiths is a very sword and sandal, Conan the Barbarian style story of vengeance and triumph. Normally this kind of thing is not my cup of tea. However it also involves airships, ancient civilizations and floating ruins and that, my friends, is 100% my caffeinated beverage of choice, so I was willing to deal with the rest.

Don’t get me wrong. Otter has written a story with a lot of elements tailor made to get my attention but the story is by no means perfect. His prose is a little rough at points and his transitions between some scenes or between points of view are often a little jarring. His dialog can feel a bit stilted, although I believe part of that is a purposeful attempt to make it feel archaic and in that it succeeds. It won’t work for everyone, though. All in all, the rough prose is not a big issue. It is his first work and there’s plenty of room to allow for improvement there and I think most people can enjoy the narrative in spite of that. On the other hand, the core of the story is something he handles very well so far.

Steel and Stormbright, his protagonists, have a wholesome, brotherly relationship. It sounds odd to say that but seeing such simple, straight forward and wholesome male friendship its rare and precious these days and I’m very glad the effort has been put into it. Likewise, the target of their vengeance, General Caerst, manages to feel worth of their ire without lapsing into caricature. While Caerst’s goddess does come off as a bit cartoonish… she is a pagan deity. Subtlety is not their forte.

In short, if you want a crazy story about two brothers looking to save their father from slavery and avenge themselves on the civilization that enslaved them, The Curse of the Star Wraiths will bring you the first installment in just such a story with the promise of more to come from an author with a creative mind and promising skill. It’s my hope that sticking with it will let us see the brothers grow into something truly special.

The Waking Nightmares – by M.D. Boncher

If you’ve ever wanted a Flash Gordon style serial about a powerful, almost godlike invader destroying Earth and leaving a handful of people to pick up the wreckage, the Tales from the Dream Nebula series might be just what you wanted. The Waking Nightmares is the third installment in that series. In it, interplanetary truckers Winston and Bubby find themselves crashing with their new patrons, the Junkers, while their damaged ship is repaired.

While there, the two get shown around the estate and reach the mail room just as a suspicious package is delivered. The package turns out to be a colony of terrifying, flesh eating monsters. Hooray! From there our heroes have to fight a desperate, running battle with creatures they barely understand in an attempt to save their hides and hopefully keep their new patron alive as well. There’s a lot of inventive thinking and well paced action in the story.

The stories we’re looking at today have ideas that appeal strongly to me, personally, and in The Waking Nightmares it’s the tricky task of monster slaying. Winston, Bubby and the others have to keep their wits about them to beat the creatures and I find that a lot of fun. The action is also clear and easy to follow, in spite of how chaotic it is. That’s a real achievement in this kinds of fast paced, action adventure stories and is another part of what I really liked about book.

Also impressive is how well I felt I knew Winston after the tale was done. There are several parts of the story where previous events in his life were referenced and each time they came up I had a pretty good idea how those events shaped him, even if I didn’t know what the events themselves were. That’s slick work right there. On one occasion I felt like having a little more context about what those events actually were would have helped me understand a moment better but, outside of that, I feel like Boncher hit a really good balance point in hinting at the past and pushing his story forward. If you want a swashbuckling scifi story to sink your teeth into, this might be just what the doctor ordered.


Now it bears pointing out that these are books published independently and perhaps they are not quite as slick and finished as something you might get from a mainstream publisher. However they are good, fun reads written with a great amount of heart. If you can bear with a few rough edges and you’re looking for rousing adventure of a kind you don’t see from big publishers that often anymore they’re worth checking out.

With this we’ve reached the end of my publications for the year. I’ll be taking next week off for the holidays and we’ll return to our regularly scheduled blogging in 2024. As always I’m grateful to all of you who turn up to read the words I painstakingly put together and I hope you enjoy looking at them as much as I enjoy writing them. May your time with family be a blessing and the Lord give you joy this season.

Woman on Fire

Pewter and Iron was a story that kind of came out of nowhere but I left a hook for a sequel in the middle of it subconsciously. While I have a lot of other Nerona stories I’d like to share at some point I actually got to that sequel before any of them so here it is. Once again we change viewpoints. Caesar’s Company is an idea I had from the inception of Nerona but my original purpose was to tell stories about it from Caesar’s point of view. It turns out several of his subordinates were very interesting on their own. The one outside of Caesar himself that really grabbed my imagination was Tiberius Twice and it turns out he’s the one you get to hear about first.


Among the many mercenary companies of Nerona’s condottieri there were many strange tales and legendary names. The Carrion Drunkard, a manlike thing they said appeared on battlefields offering drink to wounded soldiers, only to reveal its wineskin was full of blood rather than the fruit of the vine. The Conte Vemici, who held Paloma Bridge against an army of a thousands. For Tiberius Twice the one that loomed largest in his mind was his own captain, Caesar Shieldbreaker, who had led his condottieri to victory in dozens of conflicts for nearly fifteen years.

The one most spoken of as a frustration and a trial was Benicio Gale. With his green right arm and gift to command the winds as his own breath, Benicio cut a gallant figure wherever he turned up, which was almost always some small village or out of the way estate. Over the last four years he’d come from nowhere and built himself an ever growing reputation as the frustration of regular soldiers and mercenaries alike, blowing whole companies of men off of mountainsides or into rivers whenever they happened to threaten his current employer. He tended to work alone or with one or two other bravos.

Worst of all, he was cheap. A man with his talents could command a prince’s fortune for his services but Benicio avoided the castles and city squares of Nerona in favor of selling his services to provincial mayors and town councils at a fraction of their worth. All of which made it a surreal experience to clamber through the ruins of Troas with him. Tiberius found himself watching Benicio as they picked their way through an alley between two ruined houses that had long since collapsed in on themselves, leaving chest high walls looking over small piles of rubble and dust that might have once been furniture or people.

The bravo was surprisingly normal, strange arm aside. About five foot eight inches tall, dark, curly hair, hard brown eyes like a rock that had been kicked back and forth across cobbled streets for its whole life, Benicio looked much like the average Neronan peasant. However, to Tiberius’ trained eye, the way he moved through the ruins told a different story. Romanticists talked about bravos as stalkers, predators, creatures on the prowl for profit and fame, but Benicio was none of those things. He was a lookout. Measured movements, designed to give him a solid view of his surroundings, interspersed with small but precise advancements that brought him to the limit of his vigilance before he stopped to reconnoiter things again.

“There.” Benicio paused and pointed towards a sinkhole fifty or sixty feet ahead of them, in the middle of a small square. Tiberius was no expert but he guessed the sinkhole was originally a well back when Troas was an inhabited city. Before the Gulf of Lum drowned half of it.

It was very early in the morning, shortly after daybreak, and the hard shadows left in the wake of the King of Dawn made it so Tiberius had to squint to figure out what Benicio was pointing at. Finally he determined that several scorch marks ringed the sinkhole. “You think your compatriot left those?” He asked. “I suppose his gift was a Flame Hand or Flame Heart?”

“She is a Flame Heart,” Benicio said, loosening his rapier in its sheath.

“Well, in either case you can go down after her first so she doesn’t just incinerate us when we look over the edge,” Tiberius said mildly. “Unless you plan to just stab her?”

Benicio gave him a disturbed look. “Why would I do that?”

“I don’t know, you’re the one with your hand on your sword.”

“Because the only reason for that kind of scorching is because she was fighting with something when she went down that hole.”

Tiberius laughed. “Are you sure about that? I heard you blew her off the battlefield back there yourself and she went laughing. Maybe she just likes burning things.”

“If you’re not here to help you didn’t have to come.”

He turned serious immediately. “No. The Prince of Torrence pays our captain and you are on the Prince’s land under arms without permission. We’re being kind enough to let you find your friend. But Caesar isn’t going to let you or the Blacklegs with you run around on your own. We’d loose our commission.”

“Can’t have you not getting your blood money,” Benicio muttered.

“Spoken like a true bravo.” Tiberius grinned. “If you were ever a condottieri you would know the best commissions are those where the fighting never starts. Although given your reputation I’m surprised you’d object. I’d wager you’ve killed more people in the last year than I have and you’ve done it for far less pay than us. You do realize that cheap murder is going to be more common that the expensive variety?”

Benicio gave him a sly look. “Of course. Why do you think I’ve spent so much of my time making it so expensive for you to fight wars in the countryside?”

“Touche.” Honestly, Tiberius had never thought of the matter that way. Most condottieri believed bravos did what they did because they weren’t able to get along with others and so had to make their way by using their powers of annoyance for their employers. Apparently one, at least, had deeper reasons for what he did. “So who is your friend?”

“Belladonna is not exactly a friend,” Benicio said as they approached the sinkhole. “She’s just someone my employer assigned me to help with this job. I think she was a failsafe, since she can’t be burned to death or torn to pieces she’s guaranteed to be able to report our failure and the ultimate fate of our objective.”

“Did either of you know it was a dragon’s egg?”

“I didn’t. She might have.” Benicio offered an eloquent shrug. “With her, I never know for sure. All women are an exquisitely crafted puzzle but she is exceptional in both appearance and bafflement. I’ll be glad to send her back with news of our failure and be done with it. This whole job has been more trouble than its worth.”

Tiberius sensed he wasn’t entirely sincere although he wasn’t sure whether it was the job or the parting of ways Benicio was hedging on. “I suppose you won’t tell us who is paying your fee? The Prince will probably pay us a bonus if we can tell him. I’m sure Captain Caesar would split it with you if you were willing.”

“No. Bravos do not change sides as easily as your lot, for one, and for another I don’t know how long I would live after I betrayed this particular patron.” Benicio casually waved his hand in a dismissive way. “It is what it is.”

The two of them crouched down and looked over the sinkhole. It was pretty much what you would expect. About a quarter of the opening was still lined with worked stone, just like you would expect to see around a well. The rest was a rough edged tunnel that vanished into the dark about eight or nine feet down. Benicio dug into a pack he had brought with him and pulled out a rag and a small clay bottle with a cork stopper. He doused the rag in a strong smelling oil, wrapped it around a branch and lit it, then tossed it down the hole.

The makeshift torch landed about twelve feet down on a rough stone surface. From their viewpoint at the top it was difficult to see more than twenty or thirty square feet around where the torch landed but it all looked the same. Fairly dry stones piled randomly after the sinkhole collapsed in. The two men exchanged a quick glance then Tiberius offered the other a sweeping gesture, as if to say after you. Benicio took a deep breath and jumped straight down.

As his feet passed through the sinkhole he breathed out with the force of a hurricane, the tempestuous blast from his mouth slowing his fall to the speed of a downy feather dropping from a passing bird. It would’ve been impressive to see if the wind hadn’t blown the torch out and left the chamber below in darkness. Or at least that’s what it looked like at first. After a few seconds Tiberius’ eyes adjusted to the change of lighting and he realized he could see a dim glow coming from off to the left of the sinkhole. Peering over the ledge he called, “What do you see, Gale?”

The only response was a barely audible, “Shh!”

That probably wasn’t a good sign. Looking around he spotted an old stone trough sitting on stout stone legs and quickly passed a rope around it as an anchor. Then he went back to the sink hole, laid a cloth over the edge for the rope to run across so it wouldn’t get damaged and let himself down. Benicio made his descent easier by slowing it down. Tiberius planned to get down by doing just the opposite.

He wasn’t sure where the Gift called Twice at Once got it’s name but it – both Gift and name – had proven very difficult for him when he was young. He was never sure why playing games with other kids left him so tired. He also didn’t understand why catching things, running footraces and winning stick fights was so difficult for the others. The fact that simple tasks like these were so simple for him but he had no apparent Gift made him a target of both loathing and envy in his home town.

It wasn’t until he met Caesar Shieldbreaker a decade ago that he met someone who understood it. That was how he started his time as a condottieri. He’s learned fencing, campaigning and the mastery of his Gift, seen Caesar go from a well known captain to the foremost captain in the nation. But most of all he’d learned to live two seconds in one.

As Tiberius gently let himself down the rope he breathed deep and focused, watching the small pebbles that slid off the lip of the sinkhole with him slow their descent. By the time he reached the bottom they had only fallen half the distance. He quickly slid off to one side of the hole, his head swiveling about as his eyes adjusted to the darkness. He caught sight of Benicio a few steps ahead but there wasn’t much else around them. The rocky ground around them gave way to a pool of water off to the west and a tunnel that led and inland roughly north northeast.

Tiberius let his focus slip and caught his breath. Barely ten seconds had passed for the rest of the world and he had lived twenty but it exhausted him like he had spent a full minute running. Benicio glanced over his shoulder. “Are you alright?”

“For now. Did you find any more signs of your friend?”

“Scorch marks leading off that way,” Benicio said, pointing off to the northeast, “but more than that, listen.”

Tiberius cocked his head, wondering what he was on about, but as his heartbeat slowed he understood. The faint strains of lute and violin were drifting through the cavern. His heart sank into his boots as Tiberius realized he’d stumbled on yet another tall tale from the darkest parts of Nerona. “The Fair Folk.”

“Either that or pirates are using the ruins as a shelter, they’re equally likely options.”

“How many pirate crews do you know that could contain a Flame Heart?”

“Okay. Probably the Fair Folk.” Benicio pinched the bridge of his nose between his fingers. “Zalt. She had to go and find the only nest of Fair Folk in a hundred miles of the Gulf.”

“They’re playing music.” Tiberius shook his head. “Have you heard what they do to people who interrupt their music? They’ll find our skeletons here a hundred years from now!”

“I have to bring her back.”

“I don’t know who your patron is, Benicio Gale, but he or she is not as likely to leave you dead as the Fair Folk when you intrude on their revelry.”

Benicio started grimly towards the sound of music. “There’s more to it than the job. Her mind isn’t well, Tiberius Twice, and I promised I would help it heal. You won’t understand it but I swore it on my arm and that’s something I can’t take back. Besides, I don’t care how ‘fair’ they think they are I can’t leave her to the tender mercies of those people. You don’t have to come.”

For a long moment Tiberius hesitated, looking back to the rope and then towards Benicio over and over again. Ultimately, the condottieri was wrong. His captain had given him an order and, for Tiberius, that meant he did have to come. So he steeled himself and followed reluctantly after Benicio.

Halfway down the tunnel Tiberius’ ears popped and the rough tunnel under his feet transformed into a paved brick hall with torches in sconces along the walls. They’d crossed a portal to the lands of the Folk. No turning back now. The brick opened up into a huge hall full of the strange, near-human creatures that the people of Nerona called Fair.

Not because they were beautiful, however. The doorway they passed through was flanked by two eight foot tall creatures who’s legs were longer than Tiberius was tall, who’s bodies were barely present and who’s hands barely came down past their hips but had fingers that hung to their knees. A small bump on top of their round torsos sported huge, bushy eyebrows nearly covering small, beady eyes. The music was coming from creatures with round bodies wearing ladybug cloaks. Black, clattering claws plucked at lute strings and pulled bows across odd, misshapen violins.

All up and down the hall waltzed equally strange creatures. They were a riot of misproportioned limbs, insect wings, bushy fur, extra eyes and any number of other wild and outrageous elements. Only one of them was human. It was hard for Tiberius to tell much about her since she was made entirely of living fire and throwing off waves of heat as she danced and writhed to the tune of the music. The Fair Folk clustered around her, approaching her one at a time to try and dance. However Belladonna showed no concern for any of them, her own bizarre dance leading her across the floor in unpredictable patterns that forced most of them to pull away or get burned.

One of the towering guard Folk peered down at Benicio and Tiberius, speaking in a surprisingly booming voice. “Ho, there, mortal men and welcome to the celebration.”

Tiberius froze, unsure of what to do in response. The Fair Folk supposedly had their own inviolable rules of culture and propriety but no one was quite sure what they were or when they applied. The few mortal men who had cracked one of the Folk’s rules rarely shared it. Benicio reached up and removed his feathered hat and straightened his doublet. “Forgive our intrusion, Fair one. We meant no offense, only to come and retrieve our friend there. May we?”

“No, no, mortal man.” The guard creature swung its body back and forth in a motion Tiberius chose to interpret as shaking its head in denial. “It is not fair for one to leave the floor before their dance is done! You must let her dance.”

“And how long must she dance?” Benicio asked. Tiberius was sure that the same stories running through his mind was running through the other man’s. Stories about endless dances, enchanted shoes and any other number of bizarre things that had befallen people who stumbled across the revels of the Fair Folk.

“Until the steps are done!” The strange creature laughed. “But alas she is mortal woman and the tunes of the Fair are not known to her, they drive her to strange steps we do not know! Who can dance the whole dance with her? Not I! Perhaps not anyone! Will you?”

Benicio scowled and folded his arms, green over normal, saying, “Dance with her like that? I’d get burned to a crisp. How long will the dance go if no one can match her?”

“How long?” The creatures voice turned confused and one of its spidery, misshapen hands reached up to scratch between its eyebrows. “As I said, until it is done, one way or the other! Nothing else would be fair to her.”

“Zalt!” Benicio spat the word, drawing disapproving looks from the surrounding Folk. “Well, I’ll have to try, I suppose. I can get a little singed if it means-”

“No, mortal man!” The guard creature shook its body once again. “For her own amusement does she dance and we dance to share in it! If you are burned in such a thing how could it be fair? If you are harmed you are not fit to dance with her and must stand aside for a suitable partner.”

Benicio turned incredulous. “What do you mean I can’t get burned? Have you seen her? She’s a Flame Heart in full burn, there’s no way I can keep up with her drunken dancing-”

Tiberius put a hand on his shoulder. “Peace, Benicio. If it will get us out of this hall alive I’ll take care of it.”

With that Tiberius began to shoulder his way through the assembled throng of Fair Folk, doing his best to ignore the strange skins and shells he brushed against, the insectile eyes that turned to him and the strange, unsettling voices that called to him. Finally he reached the dance floor and watched, trying to guess how he took his turn. The Fair Folk seemed to have some kind of method of choosing who would go next but Tiberius watched three dancers go out, get burned and return to the crowd without figuring out what it was. Then one of the Folk next to him nudged him with an fur covered hand. “Go, mortal man,” the creature chirped. “It is time you danced your turn!”

Well, it didn’t make sense but nothing else did so there was nothing to do but give it his best. As he stepped out, Tiberius realized he probably should have watched Belladonna rather than the Folk that danced with her. There was a strange grace to the movements of the woman on fire. When the flickering of the flame mixed with the sensuous movements of a woman’s body and the enchanting strains of the music it was hard to focus. But Tiberius’ whole life was built on focus.

So focus he did, pushing aside the strange creatures, the threat of fire and the potential consequences of failure. He focused and lived twice at once. The flicker of flames slowed, the strains of music turned to mud and the erotic promise of womankind was blunted as its natural sway distorted. Tiberius slid close to the woman called Belladonna and allowed himself to slip into something like a dance. He matched her step for step. He leaned back when she thrust forward, he swayed to counter her dip and he never let himself touch her flame.

Blood rushed through his veins and his heart pounded. But all he had to do was focus. His arms and legs began to burn as the strain of moving them through all that extra time took its toll. Focus kept them moving. The muddy sound of the music swelled then was swallowed by some deeper avalanche of sound. Focus rode above it.

Focus could only last so long. Tiberius sharpened his mind to its utmost and his focus lasted for a count of forty-five. Then fifty. He knew the exact count of the time because he always did. His Gift made it so. The dance continued on. A seventy count, then a hundred went past and still the dance dragged on. Belladonna continued to swing and sway. His arms grew heavier and heavier, his feet refused to move quite like he wanted. Around the edges of his vision the world went out of focus.

Tiberius was not going to last much longer.

Then, just as he stepped forward to match her step back Tiberius felt his focus snap. The swelling music, the cheering crowd, Belladonna’s wild dancing all snapped back to full speed and Tiberius felt his knees shaking as he struggled to control his momentum. Belladonna swung around, shifting her weight forward unexpectedly. With a panicked flailing Tiberius jerked back and tried to keep his balance. Just when he though the woman was going to swipe an arm across his chest and set his doublet alight Belladonna faltered, her body returning to that of a normal woman, and she slumped down.

Tiberius tried to grab her but he didn’t have the strength for it and they both collapsed on the ground. The music hit its last crescendo and the crowd exploded in cheers. Bewildered, Tiberius sat there and cradled his dance partner wondering how he was going to get out of the Folk’s realm if he couldn’t even get his breath and stand. Then the cheering, the music, the dance hall and all it’s Folk vanished. Tiberius and Belladonna were left seated on rough stone with Benicio watching from some fifteen feet away, the echoes of the revel still ringing in their ears.

Tiberius let out a sigh. “We made it.”

The other man approached, his eyebrows raised in recognition of the accomplishment. “That you did. Congratulations, Tiberius Twice, I think you’ve made a name for yourself with that. Not many can say they danced with the Folk and lived to tell about it.”

Tiberius let himself slump down flat on his back. “If this is all it takes to make a name I don’t understand how anyone ever managed it. I feel like a fool. Never let me try a stunt like that again.”

“Oh, I won’t. As I said, Belladonna is my responsibility and I’m in your debt for your help here. I will repay it but I’d rather not owe you anything more.”

“Agreed. I have enough of a name to last a lifetime.”

Unexpected Fun With L. Jagi Lamplighter

If you were to walk through the forest and happen across a statue of a woman with feathered wings sitting in a clearing beside a long abandoned stone building, what would you think? Most likely you would assume you’d found an old church, long abandoned by its congregation. Perhaps you’d share a moment of comradery with the place’s guardian angel before continuing on your way. Regardless, you probably wouldn’t find that much out of place with it. 

When Rachel Griffon happens on such a scene at the beginning of The Unexpected Enlightenment of Rachel Griffon that’s not at all how she reacts. 

Rachel has no idea what the statue is when she discovers it and that takes some real doing since she has a flawless memory and has read every travelog, adventure tale and bestiary in her grandfather’s library. Her grandfather was one of the foremost scholars in the World of the Wise, for him to not know something takes quite a bit of doing. It is the mystery of the winged woman, along with a dozen other small things, that forms the core of Rachel’s drive through the course of the story. She wants to know the secrets of the world. Then she wants to share them, for it’s the thrill of revelation that truly fascinates her. 

As a twelve year old girl, nearly thirteen, you might expect the secrets that most interest her to be of a particularly mundane variety. However, while some mundane middle school drama afflicts Rachel, it’s not the focus of the story. The Roanoke Academy of Magical Arts has a great deal more going on in its ancient hallways than just puberty driven angst. 

Anyone remotely familiar with the Harry Potter franchise will immediately understand the core premise of L. Jagi Lamplighter’s series. Rachel Griffon is newly enrolled in magic school and in the halls of that school she will find far more of an education in far more things than she expected. The hidden wizards of her world – the Wise – live far more complicated lives than she expected. Rachel herself isn’t quite what you’d expect of a Harry Potter knockoff. 

Now before I go on let me address that obvious issue you may be raising right now. “Nate,” you say, “middlegrade fantasy is a very worn out genre. How can you expect me to get invested in yet another tale of magical teenagers going to magic school?

I understand this objection. But Lamplighter brings a sense of myth that is badly lacking from a lot of middlegrade literature. Many books written for teens try to tap into the sense, so common in young people, that the world is new and undiscovered and everything that exists just came into existence moments ago. Lamplighter, on the other hand, presents us with a world that is ancient and shaped by strange forces that have left Rachel and her friends in very unenviable postions. Yet those forces are not all hostile or malevolent. Some of them are but most of them are just consequences of big decisions made ages ago, they are signposts of a history that must be understood and lived in by our heroes if they ever hope to make anythign of themselves or their world.

It’s a much stronger approach to worldbuilding and character growth than I’ve found in most middlegrade writing, and that alone makes it worthwhile. Add in the mysteries and character dynamics that Lamplighter does so well and you have a very strong read for just about any audience.

Back to our protagonist. She’s a well bred young woman with loving parents and a noble lineage. Magic was always something she knew of, while her mother held a fondness for the mundane people – the Unwary – that helps her keep a fairly nuanced perspective on the world around her. While a flawless memory helps her with the study of magic, she’s no great talent. Many of her peers pick up their lessons faster than she does. 

Rachel doesn’t even have a grand destiny laid out before her. Some of her friends are fated for heroics, but Rachel herself isn’t one of them. If she wishes to do some great thing for the world around her she’ll have to find that work and take it on herself. 

The conflicts at Roanoke are deeply steeped in the history and lore of Lamplighter’s world. As you might expect of a story starring someone who never forgets, connecting details of past events to unravel current problems is an ongoing theme in this story. Rachel delights in gathering facts, making connections and revealing her secrets at the right moment. We delight in seeing whether she’s chosen the right moment (which she does often) or if youth and naivety have deceived her and she’s misread the situation (which isn’t rare). 

Beneath all the flashy magic spells, shadows of old evils and standard schoolyard drama, however, Rachel faces deeper issues. One touch I really liked came in the third novel. After several weeks of chaos, emotional strain and traumatic events, Rachel finds herself on the verge of a very believable mental breakdown which is resolved, as so many things in her life, by the unexpected but totally coherent application of her flawless memories. It’s hard to describe more without spoiling the moment, so I’ll leave it at that – suffice it to say this is one of my favorite moments in the series so far. 

Another interesting deep current running through Lamplighter’s novels is the twin questions of purpose and allegiance. Rachel is constantly looking at her loyalties to friends and family and comparing them to her own wants and goals. She’s a very driven character, but also a very devoted one. Reconciling her strong sense of duty to principle and loyalty to others is difficult for her. Her principles are challenged and some are worn down in ways that don’t benefit her. Five novels in and Rachel still doesn’t have a clear cut, highest standard for her life. Yet. 

But there are hints. 

One of the greatest achievements Lamplighter reaches with her series is inviting the audience to share Rachel’s delight in knowing a secret. Yes, we follow her adventures and know many of the secrets she knows. However, things go a layer deeper than that. You remember our opening thought experiment, of finding a guardian angel by a ruined church? This is a secret we know that Rachel does not. 

There are other hints to that secret in the early pages of the first book. Rachel owns a model of broom known as a steeplechaser. However, no one knows the meaning of the word steeple. It’s an orphaned word, like saint, so old that its meaning is lost even though people still use it. And, of course, there is the familiar. All the students at Roanoke have familiars but Rachel’s roommate brought a particularly unusual one. A lion, miniaturized for convenience. A lion that talks to a raven on the windowsill in the middle of the night. Even among the Wise, even among the enhanced creatures known as familiars, animals don’t talk. 

But these two do. The lion isn’t supposed to be there, the raven says. He was called, the lion explains, and where he is called no earthly power can keep him from answering. Not even in a world where knowledge of him has been locked away. 

This is the secret we know, but Rachel does not. We know the Lion of Judah and we get to watch Rachel slowly discover him in spite of the painstaking efforts made to hide him from view. In spite of the fact that the lion here is behind enemy lines. In spite of all the other things clamoring for her attention. This part of Rachel’s story is what truly gripped me as I read Lamplighter’s books. It was a brilliant idea, executed in a way that did a wonderful job of holding my attention. If watching someone discover that secret seems like a worthwhile tale to you, I would highly recommend this tale. 

Firespinner Chapter Twelve – Farewells at Last Light

Previous Chapter

Roy gently took Andrew Blythe from his seat on O’Hara’s bushwalker and set the boy on the ground, sleepy and unsteady but otherwise fine. He’d spent most of the trip asleep, like his brother. The ordeal the Blythe boys had gone through had taken a lot out of them but didn’t seem to have done any serious harm. There was one curious side effect, though.

Roy watched as Andrew and River Reeds walked into the Blythe house in perfect synchronization. “I’m pretty sure that will wear off in another few days,” he said to Nora. “But if it doesn’t Grunt can put the word out and we’ll see if we can find a true blue medicine man to look at it.”

“Thank you, Mr. Harper,” Nora said. “You’ve been very kind. This wasn’t part of what you were hired for.”

“Not a problem, ma’am.”

“But not necessary either,” Oldfathers put in. Roy couldn’t help but note that he’d linked arms with the widow. “I’ll be travelling for a few days to gather up some loose ends, but I plan to come back once I’m done. I’m thinking of settling down here. I’m getting too old to sleep in the open for weeks on end.”

Grunt and O’Hara looked surprised at that but Roy took it in stride. There were consequences to tampering with magic on the scale they had and Oldfathers had assumed duties that bore significant consequences, whether he’d realized it at the time or not. The old druid knew magic and its costs better than any of them and Roy had confidence Oldfathers would see them out.

“Sounds like you’ll be well looked after, Mrs. Blythe,” Roy said with a warm smile. “Hopefully you never need my services again.”

Nora laughed. “Getting involved with one legend of the west would be enough for a lifetime and I’ve already seen two. I got no appetite for a third.”

Roy chuckled. “Hopefully if you do it will be more benign than the Yose and Mete twins or General Oldfathers.”

She glanced at the general out of the corner of her eye. “Who, him? He belongs to the east.”

Roy’s brow furrowed. “Then what’s the second? Or are you counting the Brothers separately?”

Nora smiled and shook her head. “Take care of yourself out there, Mr. Harper. If you ever visit Mr. Grunwald here in town be sure to stop in, you hear?”

It sounded like a dodge but Roy couldn’t figure out why she would so he let it go. “Of course.”

Roy waited as a few more quiet words passed between her and the general then they set out for Grunt’s house. O’Hara parted ways when the passed the main street in order to take her bushwalker back outside the walls, leaving Grunt with a whispered promise to visit later. That left Roy with Grunt and the general. The three men walked in silence for a while, then Oldfathers said, “I appreciate your not taking me in.”

“I’m not an officer of the law,” Roy said. “I don’t have an obligation to bring in bounties.”

“Not even an old Lakeshire officer?”

Roy shrugged. “It’s been a long time, General. I’m not saying I would’ve done what you did in your situation but you’ve earned a little grace, at least. And…” His glance drifted up towards the mountain top. “I’m not sure how Yose and Mete would react if their new father left so soon.”

The general grunted something that might have been a laugh. “As you say. Well, I suppose I can take the pieces of that nawonota off your hands, if you want. I have a stash where I can bury them for a few decades at least.”

“It’s all right. The Packards have an Iron Room for dangerous magic items set up in Hardwick. It’s a day’s travel each way and that’s easy enough to work into my route back to Leondale. I’d rather the pieces of that thing sit on iron until all the magic’s leached out of them than just bury them out in the wilderness.”

Oldfathers chuckled. “And the Railway Detectives will just take an unknown artifact – or the pieces of one – off your hands because you say so?”

“And because I work for them from time to time.”

“And Allen Packard is his uncle,” Grunt added.

“And that.” Roy hefted the bundle holding the nawonota’s pieces. “Don’t worry, General. This will be well taken care of. And I’ll get that fulminite crystal out of the slag you made of my falcatta and send it back to you.”

“Keep it,” the General said. “I think you’ve earned it and you never know when it may come in handy out there. You’re going to have more chances to use it than me anyway.”

They rounded the corner to Grunt’s house and the big man ducked in the door to retrieve Roy’s travel bag. “Tell me something, General,” Roy said as they waited. “How are you going to pass on that journal of yours if you’re settling down here? Do you think someone will just come through and take it off your hands? It doesn’t seem like the best strategy, this being the end of the rail line and all.”

Oldfathers tapped his hexwood staff on the ground once which set it to unfolding in to its full sized tree form. “The journal will tell its owner when and where to find the next person in line. I’m not worried about passing it on. Never was.”

Grunt returned and handed Roy his bag. “Half an hour before the last train leaves,” he said. “Anyone up for a last drink?”

“No, thank you,” Oldfathers said.

“Gave it up, remember?” Roy tipped his hat in the general’s direction. “General Oldfathers, as much as it surprises me to say it, it’s been a pleasure.”

“Likewise. Take care of yourselves, Mr. Harper. Mr. Grunwald. Stay true to the Quest and it will bear fruit, in time.” The hexwood was unfolded to its full twelve foot height and its branches gathered Oldfathers up, allowing him to partially recline against its trunk.

“May Our Lady guide you to warm hearthfires,” Grunt said.

“Hearthfires, gentlemen. And Roy.” Oldfathers tapped his jacket’s left breast twice, winked and then whisked away on the frantic churning of the hexwood’s roots.

Confused, Roy patted his jacket in the place Oldfathers indicated.

Felt something solid there.

And pulled out Pellinore’s Journal.

“Dust and ashes,” Roy muttered.

Grunt burst out laughing.

“This isn’t funny.”

“Oh, I’m sure it’s serious as dead iron, Roy.” Grunt got control of himself. “But you have to admit it’s at least a little funny, too.”

Roy sighed and put the journal away. “Fine. Fine. Let’s go, the last train leaves in twenty five minutes and I need to stop by your local sundries supplier.”

“Sure.” Grunt locked his door and pocketed the keys. “What do you need?”

“Paper and ink. It seems there’s some writing in my future…”

Firespinner Chapter Eleven – The Day in Balance

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As it turned out nothing happened for most of the day.

Roy was expecting Yose sometime between dawn and midmorning, the time when the sun was ascending, since he was supposedly tied to the Primeval Fire. But Thomas Blythe failed to appear. After midmorning they entered the time of balance, with the sun reaching apogee and slowly beginning its descent. Nothing happened then, either. As it turned out things began about an hour before full dusk when Thomas Blythe erupted out of the stream with no warning, flying over O’Hara’s rampart with a good three feet to spare. He landed with a sizzling thud, his features shrouded by a billowing cloud of steam and rippling waves of heat.

To his credit, in spite of the sudden arrival following a long wait, Reeds reacted instantly. A wall of shimmering red rectangles sprouted from a copper line on the ground, converging on a bronze talisman Reeds held aloft in his left hand. It was a crude ward and started crumbling almost as soon as Thomas collided with it. Reeds held a bronze wand in his other hand, quickly connecting a predrawn set of glyphs to finish a more effective ward that spat flames in a thicker, stronger barrier in front of the possessed boy.

O’Hara’s earthworks rumbled as the tiles on her board clacked, ensorcelled tiles and sulfurite crystals sliding across it as she reworked their formation and, in the same action, rearranged the land itself. The raised earth by the creek began to sink back into the ground as a new barrier of equal thickness but greater height formed behind Reeds.

But that wasn’t the loudest noise at hand. At the other end of the hill the massive trees at the foot of the cliff creaked to life and began to rip the cliffside apart. Rather than wait, Grunt and Marshall moved up to hack at the trees. The pines began to teeter and fall under their onslaught. But it ended almost as soon as it began when a surge of water burst from the opening in the cliff and swept both men back down towards the crater. A small figure appeared at the new entrance in the cliffside and started towards the crater, flanked by the trees.

Down in the center of the crater itself the stones began to shift. Overhead the clouds left from the previous day’s rain began to roil and churn.

“Nora!” Roy yelled. “Find the nawonota!”

That was their first gambit. If the Brothers had somehow co-opted Thomas and Andrew Blythe into playing out their old sibling rivalry perhaps the grudge could be undercut by introducing Nora into the role of peacekeeper, as Yose and Mete’s mother had been between them. Oldfathers considered it a long shot but it was simple and easy to try, so Roy lined it up first.

But it was anyone’s guess whether Yose and Mete would recognize Nora as their mother or not. So Grunt and Marshall moved to block Mete and Reeds started working on a third barrier, this one grounded in O’Hara’s earthwork itself. Or, at least, he started. Then he suddenly stopped and pivoted to look directly up the hill at the crater. Further up, Andrew Blythe did the same.

In unison both of them said, “Ket!”

The word echoed over the hillside with preternatural clarity. Roy spoke no Sanna but he knew the word “No” when he heard it. He wasn’t sure what circumstance made them say it but he did know who was saying it – they were both under the influence of Mete now. That was a lovely little wrinkle he hadn’t anticipated.

Roy tapped Oldfathers on the shoulder. “Stop those trees, General.”

He grunted noncomittally. “Easier said than done.”

But he raised his hexwood staff up, its branches unfolding into a complicated pattern, the sulfurite crystals twined in the ends of its branches pulsing with power. The general stretched his other hand towards the top of the hill in a clutching motion and the raging pines shuddered to a stop.

“Ket!” Andrew and Reeds screamed in unison once more, they reached towards the trees with their hands and made a dragging motion. The pines shuddered as if under great strain.

One shattered into splinters.

The others lurched back into motion.

“Dust and ashes,” Roy whispered. He hadn’t thought it possible Hezekiah Oldfathers could lose a contest of sheer power.

“Coalstoking Sanna ghosts!” Apparently the general hadn’t expected it either.

But he delayed the trees long enough for Marshall to get to his feet and charge back into the fray with surprising recklessness. His club whistled through the air and smashed into the trunk of one pine, which promptly shattered into flaming twigs. For a split second Roy panicked, thinking the debris would land on Nora. But as they arced through the air they were caught in the churning winds over the crater and went spinning away.

“That doesn’t look good, General,” Roy yelled over the noise. “Looks like Yose got to Marshall, too.”

“So the Brothers have all the brothers now,” Oldfathers replied, his gestures waking some of the smaller trees and sending them upslope as fast as the newly animated pines could go. Not that such little things posed much threat to the mature, sixty foot trees under Mete’s thumb. “Pull O’Hara out, she can’t be in there when Reeds and Thomas start fighting for the Brothers. I have something that will slow them down, you try and figure out what’s happening in the crater!”

“Ignis fatuus, man, I said tell me about all your tricks!” But Roy was doing as Oldfathers said, holding his fist aloft with thumb upwards then jerking it over his shoulder in the Columbian Army’s “fall back” signal.

O’Hara stepped away from the waist high board she’d set up by the river and kicked over a brazier she’d kept burning beside it all day. A cloud of viscous white smoke poured out of it and swept over the creek bed. Reeds and Thomas disappeared from view, though the fiery glow of Thomas’ presence was still clearly visible inching up the hillside.

Marshall just kept smashing trees with his club but couldn’t get anywhere near Andrew. For a moment Roy feared the boy would reach his mother before anyone else could. Then one of the huge rocks by the crater shifted.

Lifted into the air on Grunt’s shoulders.

And flew towards Andrew at speed.

Two of Andrew’s pines leaped into the path of the missile. One was smashed flat to the ground. Grunt was already hefting another one of the huge rocks, weighing it for another throw.

But Oldfathers was focused on the growing cyclone overhead. “Roy,” he yelled. “I was right, there’s something in that nawonota. I don’t know what part of the legend that is but I don’t think it’s going to let the story end that easy. You have to keep Nora away from it.”

Roy’s attention snapped back to the crater, where the widow Blythe was tugging at a larger rock near the bottom of the pit. Her hair and dress whipped in the air and her figure was half obscured by dirt and pine needles flying through the air. Roy gripped his buckler harder. “Agreed. Keep the brothers away from the crater but let them fight each other. I don’t think that’s the main show anymore.”

A brief flash of pale blue light caught Roy’s attention. Oldfathers had drawn one of his fulminite crystals, leaned against the rock and removed his peg leg. The top had a hollow just big enough for him to slip the crystal into. The general did so and held the peg back in place, vinelike tendrils around the top wrapping about the stump of his leg before he let his pants fall back into place. “I’ll take care of it.”

“What are you doing?” Roy asked.

“Cover your ears,” Oldfathers replied. “By the Breath of Mercury, I am carried upon the Primordial Whirlwind!”

Roy understood what was happening a half second before Oldfathers finished, barely getting his hands over his ears before a lightning bolt crashed down on the general. The world turned bright as day and Roy felt the sound in his sternum. The sound repeated in a frightening staccato that nearly brought him to his knees, flashes of lightning and blackened footprints tracking Oldfathers’ path uphill to Mete and his trees. The walking grove strobed with light and the trees were thrown in all directions, born on waves of crackling lightning. Within their trunks Roy saw after images of the general, his legs transformed into pillars of lightning, lashing out against the trees, the ground and the air itself.

No wonder Oldfathers had kept that trick to himself. Many Columbians thought avatars of the First Elements were blasphemous, after all, and this was a particularly terrifying blasphemy at that.

There was no time to watch the carnage. Oldfathers fought a delaying action only as the real battle took shape in the crater.

A true whirlwind was forming over it and Roy watched the sky with distrust as he approached Nora, unsure of what he was looking for. At this point they were past gambit two, where Nora tried to calm the boys once she had the nawonota in hand, and on to the part where he should just stick iron in the thing and see if that cancelled the magic at work. But Oldfathers was right – there was something in the nawonota and it didn’t seem to be either of the Brothers. That made everything less certain.

As Roy got up to the crater a towering pine tree loomed out of the chaos but before it could do more than send a few roots stretching towards him Grunt’s ax crashed into its trunk, drawing the tree’s attention. Roy scrambled down the crater, more than used to trusting Grunt to watch his back in these situations.

The widow was saying something to him as he approached but, after the lightning strike, Roy couldn’t hear much of anything. Once she realized he was partly deaf Nora motioned like she was lifting the stone at her feet, a block of stone easily two feet tall and twice as long.

Roy shook his head. “Never mind that,” he said. Or thought he said, he couldn’t even hear himself. “Something’s off, leave the coalstoking thing and we’ll move on to the next stage.”

Another series of flashes and rumbles, felt more than heard, drew Roy’s attention long enough for him to note Oldfathers descending the slope again. O’Hara’s fog had cleared and Thomas Blythe was coming up the hill again, only to stop short when he caught a crackling kick from the general.

Roy winced but focused on the task at hand. He grabbed Nora by the shoulder and tried to pull her out of the crater. The wind caught her hair and tangled it around his arm leaving it sopping wet. The day was overcast but not rainy. Roy looked up, then down, then finally back at Nora and realized that water was streaming from her hair in sheets.

He looked back up into the sky, a sinking feeling in his stomach. The clouds were spinning in angry circles. It could have been Roy’s imagination but he thought he saw a face forming there.

Nora – was it Nora? – was saying something but Roy still couldn’t hear her. But when he squatted down, put his shoulder into the rock and pushed Nora quickly joined him. A moment later the rock shifted and rolled halfway over.

Underneath was a simple octagonal frame of ivory and leather straps. Roy had never seen one but it was obviously the nawonota. He didn’t hesitate for a moment when it came into view, just pulled all the fire he could from his buckler’s sulfirite and blasted the old Sanna artifact with it. A screaming blast of wind, loud enough that even Roy’s ringing ears could hear it, tore down from the sky and plastered him flat. The blow left his head spinning and his ribs, which had been well behaved for the last day or so, throbbing once again.

For a moment Roy thought he saw something, superimposed over the chaos of the real world. A woman in the garb of a Sanna matron cowered, the nawonota held up in both hands like a shield. A Sanna man with cruel eyes loomed over her, hand raised to strike but a bewildered look on his face. A stone ax was buried in his side and a boy of no more than twelve, who’s face resembled the father he had just killed, held the weapon’s handle. His identical twin watched from the entrance of the tent, horrified. The father’s spirit was captured. As it strained against the nawonota the second brother went from horrified inaction to stealing the artifact and running away into the hills.

Not all legends were true. If they were true they were rarely the whole truth.

And the legend of Yose and Mete was apparently not one of the few that were the entire truth. No wonder Reeds and Marshall had never triggered the legend on their own, their father was already dead and it was clearly the death of the father of the family that started the story.

The vision passed almost as soon as it came, leaving Roy to get to his feet in spite of his pain, old and new. Pain he could ignore. The nawonota was another story.

And the Sanna artifact was on the move. The whirlwind that dispersed his fireblast also lifted the nawonota into the air, dirt and dust swirling around it in an ominous cloud. Roy’s buckler was mostly empty and adding the small reserves of his cufflinks and sword wasn’t going to give him more firepower than a full buckler so he changed tactics and drew his knife.

Stepped in to slash at the relic.

And got shocked in the leg before he got close.

Electricity crackled through the dust cloud now and, while dead iron would kill any magic it touched, it wasn’t a defense for his entire body. Every time he tried to get closer to the artifact the lightning snapped at him, leaving his limbs twitching and the distance the same. Roy backed away a step, growling in frustration. That was when he realized his hearing was coming back.

Not that it hand much to tell him. Nora was babbling in Sanna now, another surprise victim of the legend. He hadn’t expected it to be so all-encompassing but if the vision he’d seen was true, and not just a fever dream, then her susceptibility to the legend’s power wasn’t surprising.

A glance up and down the hill told him no one else was doing much better. Andrew Blythe was locked in battle with Marshall, much as their twin brothers fought down the slope. Nothing Grunt or O’Hara did fazed them and only the fact that the mismatched twins were fighting each other with Oldfathers poking them as a spoiler slowed their advance on the crater.

The power of the legend seemed to crackle all up and down the hillside like a living thing.

And that was when Roy had it.

All living things were a balance of four elements and, of course, as a living thing the legend was no exception. Mete was the element of earth, Yose fire, their mother water and their father air. Roy didn’t have to kill the whole legend to win. He just had to rewrite it. “Oldfathers!” His voice was barely audible over the din of battle. “New plan, get front and center!”

Hopefully the general could hear better than Roy could. All he could do now was try and pave the way for Oldfathers. Roy pulled in every last drop of firepower from the sulfurite on his body and blasted it into the crackling dust storm, burning much of the dust away and decreasing the static in the air considerably. With a sharp click Roy ejected the sulfurite from his falcatta and crammed Oldfathers’ fulminite crystal into the empty slot. It was a poor fit for the setting, not remotely the right size or shape, but with a little fumbling he got it to stay in place.

Roy gave the weapon an experimental snap, saw that the fulminite stayed in place and heaved the weapon at the nawonota. It spun through the dust storm, the bright bronze blade crackling with electricity and channeling it down into the fulminite, draining even more power away from the gathering whirlwind. Leaving a void in the legend. Roy looked around frantically. “General Oldfathers, get to the coalstok-“

The world went white and sound flew away once again. For a moment Roy saw the same family as before, now gathered around the fire. Save for the father, who was just entering the tent carrying a brace of rabbits over one shoulder. On closer inspection he wasn’t the same man as before. He was older, a little more world weary, but his eyes were kind. Kinder than the father from before. Kinder than the man who led the trees up Briarheart. But unmistakeable none the less.

Then the vision faded and the real world crept back in at the edges. Grunt was helping Marshall to his feet. Nora was struggling against the buffeting wind, which seemed to be fading but was still pretty strong. And Oldfathers was picking up the pieces of –

Of Roy’s sword. He was holding the nawonota in his other hand, still very much intact. Roy staggered over to him and held his hand out for the artifact. The general passed it to him, saying, “It looks inert, though I’m not sure that means it’s safe. What did you do?”

“That was all you, General.” He took the nawonota and carefully cut the leather that bound it together with his iron dagger. “I agree with you on the safety issue, though. I know a safe place to keep the pieces for a while. In the meantime, let’s get off this coalstoking mountain.”

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